Comments | whitelilies22: Kira/Cagalli fic ^^

whitelilies22

Kira/Cagalli fic ^^

May 14, 2006 20:10

Fandom: Gundam SEED/Destiny
Pairing: Kira/Cagalli
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't own Gundam SEED/Destiny or any of its characters.
Warnings: Pedophiles, incest

This was inspired by an episode of Smart Guy [yeah...I watch it sometimes...]. I suppose this could be seen as a mother's day fic.

( Unlucky )

gundam seed destiny, 100 chances, fiction, kira/cagalli

Comments 10

cloudedge May 15 2006, 04:08:33 UTC

*cry*
poor Hiro ; ;~
All parents wants their children to be safe... but sending them away isn't the way to do it, Cagalli...
If anything, Hiro needs Cagalli and Kira to be around him for support, not send him away and hide him... it's not his fault. Cagalli, making him hide for something he has not done wrong will do him more harm than good...
I hope Kira will see that and convince Cagalli otherwise :)
I really enjoy your Kira here :) And their married relationship is very warm and touching :) I enjoyed the "make dinner" part very much :)

whitelilies22 May 15 2006, 05:14:10 UTC

Glad to see that this had the effect I was hoping for ^^
Yeah, since Cagalli is very emotional, she probably wouldn't be able to think straight if something like this ever did happen.
For Kira, trying to get a matured man who will be there for his family, kind of guy.

For their relationship, it's not so much as married but together. I don't know if I made it clear or not. Should there be another part to this?

cloudedge May 15 2006, 13:17:48 UTC

yes, it's true, Cagalli isn't someone who thinks straight during emotional times (right away) although I think she will tend to realize it soon after... leave it for Kira to help her out XD that's what he ALWAYS do XD

heehee, Kira does have the family-kind of guy compare to Athrun who often gives me the hard-working-stern father like Patrick :x

hummm... together but not married... I guess you're right, they do have a more "romantically" involved kind of relationship than the "family" kind of feeling to them... >.>; Although i wonder how the two keep the loving up for over 10 years lol

And I agree with itaintrite! This begs for a prequel!

whitelilies22 May 15 2006, 14:16:45 UTC

I suppose he'd get it from Lacus ^^ Athrun as a daddy...never really thought about that. I'll try to write out a prequel to this then, ^^

itaintrite May 15 2006, 09:01:32 UTC

Poor Hiro. Does he know why he's ostracised by the rest?

Overall, an enjoyable read though I got a bit confused at times when you use 'the male' instead of Kira. I'm also curious: how did Kira & Cagalli start their physical relationship. This begs a prequel ^_^

whitelilies22 May 15 2006, 14:14:44 UTC

Nope, Hiro doesn't know. Ah, sorry about that, it's kind of a habit to write like that XD
Yeah, I was thinking about writing another piece to this but wasn't sure if I wanted to do that. I guess I should and thanks for reading ^^

magi_sammy May 15 2006, 15:31:53 UTC

What a lovely fic! I love it so much! I loved how Lacus and Athrun were totally in on it but pretended not to be. XD

Poor Hiro... I feel bad for both him and his parents. It's so sad...

whitelilies22 May 15 2006, 16:00:16 UTC

Yeah, Lacus and Athrun seem to be the type to repect both of their choices.
Thanks for reading!

angrycherokee May 15 2006, 19:08:49 UTC

This is amazingly good one-shot. I'd add more, but I can't really think of anything else except niiiiiiice.

whitelilies22 May 15 2006, 19:30:02 UTC

Thanks a lot! That means a lot coming from you since you're a great kira/caga writer ^^