Title: Heart(s)
Author: Whitelder
Rating: PG for Now
Summary: Your body is a sacred temple
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About the only thing I could find to nitpick was the number of grammatical and punctuation errors I noticed. You ought to have someone beta for those things before you post. Not that it took away from my enjoyment of this beginning, only that it really does look better if it's posted without errors. But that could just be me.
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Looks like a great story!
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Three hearts and only two are working? Very cool.
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