Fic: Night and Day

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Fic: Night and Day
Fandom: Weiß Kreuz
Pairing: Yohji/Aya
Rating: R
Word count: 1540
Beta: whymzycal 
Notes: This fic was supposed to be an epically long angst-fest that just never happened. I worked on it for well over a year and just couldn't get it going past a certain point. This part stands on its own, so I'm going to let it go and hopefully free myself

Comments

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THANK YOU! From all of your comments I think I accomplished all the little details that I thought were important when I started writing this. I actually have about 5,000 words written, but other than this and the section directly after, it just wasn't going anywhere that I wanted it to. And I worked on it for at least a year and a half. I may end up writing the end one day as another stand alone, so we'll see

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This is great! It made me so happy! I love this darker version of Yohji, I think it's more accurate than the buffoon so many people write. And, though brief (or maybe because?) the sex is intensely erotic.

I like your Aya too.

*hopes to see more of same*

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Thank you so much!

I think it's easy to pass Yohji off as not too bright, etc., because that's how he appears. But we know better! He was a PI, we know from the drama CDs that he can speak some Italian, we know from Gluhen that he speaks fluent German, and he probably speaks English, if his tattoo is anything to go by. He's definitely smart!

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I love how Aya is trying to figure out who Yohji is and that implies a certain interest. This Aya makes me want to know what he's thinking and of course, what he's thinking about Yohji. ♥

Gotta love how straight forward Yohji is with his "want to have sex?" line and Aya's simple response in the affirmative. No dithering and acting shocked or offended. Two guys that want to get it on with no apologies.

I'm glad you posted it! *huggles*

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I wish so hard that I could have finished this for you! And you know it was so much longer than this. :-( But I'm so glad that you still liked it!

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HAHA! That amuses me too. I was thinking of the very first ep where the girl has that ridiculous teddy bear wallpaper, or whatever that was. It's so dated and wonderfully awful!

I really appreciate your comments! I wish like crazy I could have kept going, but after so long it was pretty obvious it wasn't going to happen. But hopefully now I can write something new!

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Hey, just knowing that you liked it is good enough for me! Thanks you! I'm hoping to start writing more now.