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white_cross_b

Fic: Metal Monsters

Apr 01, 2010 17:50

Title: Metal Monsters
Pairing/Characters: Tezuka/Fuji (sort of)
Prompt: Zodiac animals
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1173
Beta: whymzycal

( As Fuji got older he no longer thought of the ball machine as a monster, but instead as an ally that could take him places he’d never been before and make him even better at his game. )

fic: prince of tennis

Comments 11

whymzycal April 1 2010, 22:30:44 UTC

I love the "sort of" in this fic. The twist is fabulously done!

white_cross_b April 2 2010, 02:37:06 UTC

Thank you for your help, chicken!

whymzycal April 2 2010, 02:39:04 UTC

You are soooooo welcome!

tezux3 April 2 2010, 00:38:09 UTC

Aw! If only it was the real Tezuka that kissed him!

Great fic! :D

white_cross_b April 2 2010, 02:39:28 UTC

Unfortunately, sometimes the person we like just isn't interested. but at least Fuji will have some fun with Niou.

Thanks so much!

bleufleur April 2 2010, 01:25:51 UTC

That was adorable! The peek at younger Fuji's thoughts, as well as his musings on the future of Seigaku tennis, were really sweet. I didn't see the twist coming at all. Leave it to the Trickster to give me my only April's Fool Day surprise. Thanks for sharing! (And I love your icon - it's just as adorable as the story!)

white_cross_b April 2 2010, 02:40:34 UTC

Thank you so much! I didn't even realize the coincidence of April Fools Day when I posted this, so that's a treat for me!

bunnysquee April 2 2010, 01:41:30 UTC

ARGLE! PLOT TWIST AHOY!

white_cross_b April 2 2010, 02:40:55 UTC

ALEEEE!!!

dark_kana April 2 2010, 06:44:11 UTC

Awesome fic!!! ^^ I love it! Really! It's so good!
You're not mad. Why? *squeels*

Reading this really made my day !!! XD

white_cross_b April 2 2010, 12:30:27 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.