Fic: The Silence Before the Storm

Dec 02, 2009 11:13

Fic: The Silence Before the Storm
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Prompt: "Indigo"
Pairing: Hint of Tezuka/Fuji
Rating: G
Word count: 1340
Beta: whymzycal
Summary: Fuji ponders transferring to Rikkai

RIKKAI DAI ADMISSION APPLICATION )

fic: prince of tennis

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daisy_chan December 3 2009, 18:34:29 UTC
Lovely. You got their characterizations just perfectly.

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white_cross_b December 4 2009, 17:04:08 UTC
Thank you so much! I really appreciate that.

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isumi_ilde December 4 2009, 13:42:40 UTC
Oh, my. That's just lovely. Well-written, and I love the atmosphere you maintained.=D And of course, all the read-between-lines emotions throughout the fic.

“Walk me home?”
Only Fuji could say that oh-so-casually. XDDDDDD Just had to point out my favorite bit.

It's really great, I love it! Thank you for sharing!

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white_cross_b December 4 2009, 17:05:37 UTC
THANK YOU! That's nice to hear when this is my first real attempt at writing these two.

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kat_himesama December 5 2009, 21:37:19 UTC
very lovely..few words but very meaningful and powerful.
thank you for sharing!

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white_cross_b December 7 2009, 13:45:56 UTC
Thank you so much! And your icon is ridiculously cute!

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kat_himesama December 7 2009, 17:19:29 UTC
glad you liked my chibi_Fuji.. ^o^
totally crazy for him!!

will be waiting for your next update!!!

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everlind December 8 2009, 21:54:10 UTC
Amazing! This was a top-notch piece of writing and your characterizations, especially, are well done. It also felt as though it could slot right into the canon seamlessly.

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white_cross_b December 9 2009, 12:10:37 UTC
Wow, thank you! I really appreciate the feedback. I'd really like to write more of these two, so we'll see what happens.

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