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Fic: Falling From Grace

Sep 26, 2008 12:05

Fic: Falling From Grace
Author: white_cross_b
Pairing/Series: Weiß Kreuz, Aya/Yohji
Rating: NC-17
Beta: whymzycal

Notes: This fic is for elflady_2001 , for her generous contribution to livelongnmarry . I hope it's what you were hoping for!

This is a continuation of sorts of Learning To Fly, which MUST be read first.

( Aya is close, so close to the hunt, to feeling Yohji's wire around his neck, and he wonders briefly how much money Yohji would make to kill him. What is Aya's death worth? )

fic: aya/yohji

Comments 15

hirikosaunders September 26 2008, 17:00:00 UTC

That was just amazing. Hot and sweet and just...yes awesome.

white_cross_b September 27 2008, 16:59:59 UTC

Thank you SO much! I'm so glad you liked it!

hirikosaunders September 27 2008, 17:09:43 UTC

You are very welcome!

7veilsphaedra September 26 2008, 19:39:28 UTC

Vampires! Cool stream-of-consciousness story. I love how the vampirism can be taken at face value or metaphorically since the whole Weiss universe suits that so well.

white_cross_b September 27 2008, 16:59:37 UTC

Thank you! It was a challenge to keep the tone of the original story of Yohji's POV, since it's been almost a year and a half since I wrote it.

i suck at reviews but... emphasas September 26 2008, 21:00:27 UTC

...love!

Re: i suck at reviews but... white_cross_b September 27 2008, 16:58:27 UTC

That's all I needed to hear. Thank you! :-)

elflady_2001 September 27 2008, 16:04:04 UTC

Oh Aya! You know, when Aya makes a mistake, it's a doozy! This is wonderful! Aya's fall from grace is both heartbreaking and magnificent! And then, when you think everything has been screwed seven ways to breakfast, Aya finds that Yohji does want something "much, much more"! Yohji loves Aya! Aya loves Yohji! *yay!* And Aya brings Yohji over to him and now they'll have each other for eternity. *yayness* They're dead, but they're not, they'll go on forever! *blubbering commences*

Sweetie, thank you so much!

So now looking at Pond's art, I'm imagining them as vampires and it's Yohji's turn this evening to put the moves on Aya...after they've dined on evildoers of course...

white_cross_b September 27 2008, 16:57:59 UTC

Oh, thank god you like it! I've been biting my nails for two months as I wrote this, hoping that you'd approve. It was hard too, trying to keep the tone of the first one more than a year later, and to give you more story as well. I'm VERY relieved! Thank YOU!

HAHA! I think Yohji wants a taste of Aya's neck, don't you? ;-)

elflady_2001 September 28 2008, 06:02:44 UTC

Oh yes, he most definitely does. Why look at that intent on Yohji's face and the breathless anticipation on Aya's!

whymzycal September 28 2008, 18:09:11 UTC

It turned out so great! I LUFF EET. How glad am I that elflady_2001 asked for this? How glad am I that we get to read it?!? Eeeeee!