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alt_reayoon October 13 2012, 14:36:20 UTC
That was absolutely sweet! ^^ love how Jean-Eric and Jaime simply just needs the other to sleep, and the name of the boy is adorable! :) a really good read ^^

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whisper_roar October 13 2012, 14:55:55 UTC
Thank you! :)

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zeraparker October 13 2012, 15:23:35 UTC
This is so good. I'm a big pile of goo now. Jev and Jaime are so perfect with each other (but I must admit I also have big love for Daniel in this fic, he's awesome locking them in Jev's room together and all). Awesome read!

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whisper_roar October 13 2012, 15:38:49 UTC
Thanks!
Dan's awesome, I reckon he wouldn't stand for Jean-Eric being mopy on him for long.

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jenner_ginnis October 13 2012, 16:23:35 UTC
Ok I must admit I always find reading mpreg weird, but then I should imagine most men do and my god am I relieved you went with c-section [clears throat]...

Love you that you try and cover the old "how the hell is he pregnant?" angle. Quite nicely I must add.

Some great lines: It starts raining then, as wet as Jaime’s face I like the concept of 'drizzling kisses'

Well, you would too if it meant you could see your boyfriend in just swimming trunks and a smile Yes, I would, I really would...

And your humor slays me:

while he sits in one of his kitchen chairs in the middle of the room with ice-cream and cake (he’s probably spent too much time around Jenson by way of working for the BBC)

just learning that mid-afternoon naps are not just for the elderly and Kimi Raikkonen.

I can so see Webber doing IKEA stuff. Good choice.

Ha and I took so long reading, that you changed your layout by the time I got to comment!

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whisper_roar October 13 2012, 17:35:17 UTC
Thank you! *cuddles*
I was like, erm, how is he supposed to give birth? Oh, wait, we have surgery for that. (Admittedly, I borrowed the idea of how he ended up knocked up in the first place from a H50 fic on AO3. Imitation is flattery.)
I do tend to reference other drivers in my writing, so I couldn't resist a couple of in jokes. Mark/IKEA would be hilarious, you can just imagine him being that normal.
And I got bored of that layout, so yeah. It got changed.

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geri_lea October 14 2012, 11:32:37 UTC
Mpreg is something I used to wrinkle my nose at. Then I happened to read a few and kind of did an about face on the whole thing and really enjoy it now. It just happensthough that there isn't enough of it. So thank you so much for writing this!

I loved it. Jaime and Jev are adorable. So sweet together. Oh and kudos to Dan for being awesome. Brilliant 'little' fic this :)

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whisper_roar October 14 2012, 12:18:55 UTC
Same for me with mpreg.
Thank you for commenting on it :D
It started of as 'little'. And then Jev/Jaime said 'nope. we'd like ten thousand words about us please'.

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jenner_ginnis October 14 2012, 12:26:29 UTC
Now an mpreg fic I really wish would get finished: Open up and Let the Dark Horse in, maybe we could do a group poke?

Oh and Whisper_Roar... I can appreciate how annoying it is when Jev and Jaime demand you do things. Selfless of you to respond...

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whisper_roar October 14 2012, 15:04:37 UTC
Oh, I love that one! Yes, it needs finishing. A group poke is definitely required.
And how am I supposed to resist Jev and Jaime? I mean, just look at them?

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elyndys October 15 2012, 00:58:26 UTC
I really loved the way you tackled this! I like mpreg in most forms, lol, but it's so rare to see it dealt with seriously - I really liked the idea of male pregnancy being something that happens, albeit rarely, and the way you handled it against that backdrop. Really romantic and sweet, I loved how the story unfolded, and I liked the cameos from Dan and the BBC folks too! Great job! :)

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whisper_roar October 15 2012, 15:02:26 UTC
Thank you! *hugs*

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