You may hate this chapter but I love it to pieces. The angst and imagery and sadness and...well, all of it.
“You came back,” he breathes, in a voice that's nearly a squeak. “You came back.”
Eames just holds him, tight, and he's so impossibly small and fragile in Eames' arms, and he wants to freeze this moment, just hold Neil like this and shield him from everything, let him grow up and make it all happen differently.
This part in particular killed me. I had tears.
I'm so pleased this got extended to another chapter because I don't want it to end!
I'm going to cry. I'm seriously going to cry. This whole chapter was just heartbreaking; what an arc you've created for these two. I wait anxiously for every one of your updates!
I see what you mean ;) But I'll actually be sad still if Neil disappears entirely, since Neil is his real self. I guess I'm hoping that somehow, Arthur and Neil can come together and be one person.
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“You came back,” he breathes, in a voice that's nearly a squeak. “You came back.”
Eames just holds him, tight, and he's so impossibly small and fragile in Eames' arms, and he wants to freeze this moment, just hold Neil like this and shield him from everything, let him grow up and make it all happen differently.
This part in particular killed me. I had tears.
I'm so pleased this got extended to another chapter because I don't want it to end!
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ARGH.
[chews nails down to bloody stumps]
I think my most heartbreaking part was Eames laying out for Cobb specifically what lay in Neil's limbo and what it meant. Just. Augh. :(
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The ending is so up in the air with this, IDK what to expect ;___; Good end? Bad end???
Arthur/Neil uguuu~ T3T
Can't wait for the next part. It's seriously been awesome so far.
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EVER?!!! Or temporary? Oh gosh I NEEEEEED to know what's going to happen! This story is so amazing as it is heartbreaking.
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