Chicago

Nov 09, 2014 21:27

He tapdanced on a flattened cardboard box, that's what I remember. A skinny black man in a Santa hat, on the sidewalk of the Magnificent Mile. His boom box played carols with an electric beat and the crowd, too, was electric--expensive shopping bags in their hands, smiling for Christmas. A light snow was falling, and the big flakes and the lights ( Read more... )

thank god that's done, what makes you happy?, travels, ljidol, non-fiction

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i_17bingo November 10 2014, 14:42:25 UTC
...the big flakes and the lights in the trees made me rich enough to put five dollars in his hat.

What a perfect way to describe this feeling!

I lived in New York, hand-in-mouth, for most of my twenties. Recently I returned for a visit as a grownup, with a lot of time to chill out and walk around, and spend money I didn't used to have. But I don't think even that nostalgia tour brought back the feeling of that first Christmas there--naive, hopeful, excited, alive, and in love with the world--as gracefully as this.

*sigh*

I was so young.

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whipchick November 13 2014, 17:20:49 UTC
Thanks - yeah, that's what it felt like! I still look back and think, wow, that's why I moved there...There's something so magical about a city at Christmas...

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drwex November 10 2014, 21:40:09 UTC
*pebble*

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whipchick November 13 2014, 17:33:46 UTC
Thanks :)

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fodschwazzle November 11 2014, 03:57:24 UTC
How you take an incident like burning yourself, make it completely non-trivial, and then sidestep it while it fades into one more detail in a vivid slice-of-life (if that's the word I'm looking for), is one of the reasons why you are such a formidable writer. This is excellent.

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whipchick November 13 2014, 17:37:07 UTC
Thank you very much! It was so interesting to be back in Chicago and have all the old feelings come back. Glad you enjoyed!

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tonithegreat November 11 2014, 04:26:59 UTC
Oh Officer Friendly, I should not have smiled at you through my cracked windshield.

What makes you happy indeed.

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whipchick November 13 2014, 17:38:22 UTC
Seriously!

Thanks :)

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roina_arwen November 11 2014, 06:12:12 UTC
I've been to Chicago in effin' February, and *man* it was frigid! But it's a beautiful city with great pizza, so I'll go back for their pizza... in the summer. :)

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whipchick November 13 2014, 17:38:35 UTC
It's lovely in the summer, but man, that wind!

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