Red Wall by Christopher Buehlman

Jul 24, 2012 15:16

            You find yourself in what might be described as a box.
            Or a room.
            Or a cell.
            All three work just fine.
            White floor and ceiling.
            Two grey walls facing each other.
            One black wall.
            One red wall.
            Facing each other.
            Silence.
            If you ( Read more... )

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m_malcontent July 25 2012, 00:35:07 UTC
Wild and weird...awesome tale.

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pixiebelle July 25 2012, 00:53:55 UTC
That was really cool. I loved the structure of this and the fact that it's a horror poem. I think you've mentioned the one book before? I might have to check it out :)

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mollyq July 27 2012, 00:56:59 UTC
Those Across the River was one that you don't put down till it's over. Chilling and equally, if not more, creepy as Red Wall.

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sharya July 25 2012, 01:26:52 UTC
Great take on the prompt and really unique structure :)

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notodette July 25 2012, 02:42:59 UTC
Amazing format!

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beldar July 25 2012, 03:04:02 UTC
Cool. Makes me want to watch "Cube" again. =)

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