Comments | whetstone: a lack of color

whetstone

a lack of color

Apr 15, 2011 20:17

a lack of color
gdragon/seungri
rated pg
1,075 words
seungri just tries, really hard. maybe that's why jiyong likes him so much.

notes: i sat down to write my fics for help_japan and this came out. please bear with me! i've never written gri before and this may come off a bit disjointed.

( drunk, jiyong is a sloppy kisser. )

!fanfiction, #every pairing project, genre: romance, length: oneshot, pairing: gdragon/seungri, fandom: big bang

Comments 32

bollywoodrecord April 16 2011, 03:26:33 UTC

THIS IS SO SWEEEEET. I have to come back and properly comment later because I'm so in love with it right now. Seungri's reflectivness is blinding me. XD

whetstone April 16 2011, 03:32:01 UTC

haha, thank you so much! take your time :D

anonymous April 16 2011, 03:54:58 UTC

<3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

I'm not a GD/SR shipper, but I do find their relationship and Seungri's role in the group fascinating, so. I've always liked your writing, the way you treat the characters and leave them human (flawed, imperfect, dealing with each other in plausible ways, but also still the funny, loveable members we get interviews and tv and etc).

Uh, yay!

whetstone April 16 2011, 04:25:07 UTC

♥!!!

yup, i think the dynamic gri have is like... i don't know, i can't quite figure it out, especially nowadays, but it is very intriguing. but wow, that's so nice to hear -- i feel like any sort of response from me is going to be inadequate so i'm just going to say thank you. :D

gdgdbaby April 16 2011, 04:17:10 UTC

LOL OKAY DESPITE MY OBNOXIOUS TWEETING i really like the dynamic you created here and as usual your writing is amazing and fluid and amazing and you should feel amazing *__* haha no really though, i like how comfortable the style is and how the second person pov works here :3 ♥

whetstone April 16 2011, 04:26:36 UTC

LMAO WHAT ARE YOUUUU but thanks, i was kind of like ???? if i was even doing it right and i'm still not sure i did, but i'm glad you approve haha .///. ♥

ALSO STOP MAKING ME WANT CHIPOTLE ALL THE TIME!!

kyten_zstutsuru April 16 2011, 08:03:43 UTC

nawww <3 i likes this!

whetstone April 16 2011, 19:13:49 UTC

thank you!

kyten_zstutsuru April 16 2011, 23:04:42 UTC

<3 you're very welcome

miyacherries April 16 2011, 08:30:32 UTC

LOVE IT!!
The story flowing beautifully, made me feel a bit giddy, angsty, like watching them doing those things with my own eyes.

But the killer, is the last sentence!! It just melt my heart>.

whetstone April 16 2011, 19:14:38 UTC

wow, i'm so happy it made you feel that way. thanks for reading :D