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[whereupon]

Surface
by whereupon
Supernatural: Dean/ofc, preseries, R, 3,940 words.
In truth, it was pretty clear how the whole thing was going to end when he walked ragged and rainsoaked into her bar and asked for a whiskey, double, thanks babe, with a smile that turned into slightly murderous when somebody shoved a quarter into the jukebox and overrode

Comments

[borgmama1of5]

This hurt to read, for Dean and for Lucy.

Very richly written characters.

[whereupon]

Thank you! :)

[aubergineautumn]

The first sentence was so good.

[whereupon]

I'm glad it worked for you -- thank you! :)

[roque_clasique]

Oh my goodness, that's so sad, for both of them. I really hate to think of Dean alone like that -- his loneliness is so palpable in this, so - to use a kind of a melodramatic word for a not-melodramatic fic - tragic. Your OC was interesting, too, world-weary but not without tenderness. Lovely and sad.

[whereupon]

I'm so glad that the story, and the OC, worked, despite the sadness (and that it didn't come across as melodramatic!) . . . thank you! <3

[lavinialavender]

This one of those devastating fics, but it really brings to life what Dean's life was like before the start of S1, and for that it is invaluable. It's one of those I would definitely rec to anyone who didn't seem to understand. And also for having incredibly in-depth OCs, and oh such tragedy, what you do to me.

[whereupon]

Always you say such kind things. Thank you! <3

[stina_sn]

This is really a very powerful story, I like it a lot! Very well written and with such likeable characters! And Dean, well ... I just want to hug him and tell him everything's gonna be ok and that Sammy will call ...

[whereupon]

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you very much for the note. :)