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[whereupon]

Wire
by whereupon
Supernatural: Sam/Dean, preseries, R, 1,813 words.
Dean isn't meant to be here.
lavinialavender made this much better than it was.
For maerhys.

Comments

[whereupon]

Oh, I am so happy that you liked this! And my goodness, what an absolutely beautiful comment -- thank you, so much, for these words which make the story, hm, real, and also new; which turn it from a collection of words-I-wrote into something lovely and coherent and textured. Much ♥!

[tabaqui]

Oh, oh, man. The worst and the best of what they are together, loving each other but tearing each other apart, too, and Dean too-willing martyr to the cause and Sam just trying to pretend it's not what it seems.

Breaks your heart. Made me cry. Beautiful.

[whereupon]

I want to apologize for the making-you-cry aspect of it, but I am delighted that it worked for you; [t]he worst and the best of what they are together is an amazing compliment, and oh my, there are so many stories in your description of this one! ♥

[sangre_fria]

Introspective and achy and perfect. ♥

I love pre-series pieces that focus on the fact that growing up means ultimately growing apart for Sam and Dean; how they deal with how different they're becoming and how those differences will lead them down different roads before the Pilot. Just lovely.

[whereupon]

Thank you so much! ♥

Oh, me, too. There's something so endearing about that -- not tragedy, exactly, but "fact" is not quite right, either; later there will be deals made with devils and literal world-ending drama, but that time's a world ending in itself, it's just . . . quieter about it. Sadder, maybe. More fragile, more real.

[lavinialavender]

(Things I've already told you, mostly, but I miss leaving comments.)

I love your preseries Wincest and I love this piece. How you show Sam's bitterness over what's happening to Dean, how much more he wants for Dean, and how he hates what Dean has to do for the basic necessities. So heartbreaking.

And yeah, the last two paragraphs. Even with the angst, I love it so much, because it has all the truths about the immortality of Sam/Dean. Guh, that last line.

[whereupon]

And it's lovely of you to say them; they make me so happy, still. Thank you. <3

(And thank you again for making this better!)

[whereupon]

I'm so glad it worked for you, despite the heartbreak -- thank you, very much! :)