Great story, great case, perfect gloomy setting to suit their moods, but most of all I think you nailed the dialogue perfectly, really great job with that. Thanks for sharing, I really enjoyed it.
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Thank you, very much! I'm so glad that the atmosphere worked for the story, and that the dialogue seemed right, and that you enjoyed it overall, and I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know. :)
Oh, man. Apologies for that (and thank you very much for the lovely compliment that is this note of yours). I myself am having difficulty getting back into being interested in it, which is problematic as I've got like three wips I really want to do something other than "delete" with.
But, rambling. And so I shall stop that and say, instead, thank you. Again. :)
Here from crack_van, because I saw season 2 and I jumped at it. This has such a vivid sense of place, it rooted the story in a very visual way for me. I've got a clear picture of this gloomy little island drenched in rain. This particular brand of Winchester angst is where the boys live for me, and you captured it so well here.
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This is note-perfect. Unfortunately, it's raining outside and supposed to get record-breaking cold and now I'm worried that my gun isn't loaded.
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But, rambling. And so I shall stop that and say, instead, thank you. Again. :)
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