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abbysiuta August 6 2013, 04:44:24 UTC
This is just lovely. :)

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katiaswift August 6 2013, 04:48:19 UTC
Thank you so much! Comments always make my day. :)

I'm writing a second one to go along with this, so stay tuned! I have been inspired. :)

Again, thank you thank you thank you! :D

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linstock August 8 2013, 11:44:52 UTC
Poor Beverly, she's in a difficult position there. This internal dialogue shows clearly how she's struggling with herself...I can read that last line two ways...either in resignation or defiance.

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katiaswift August 8 2013, 15:47:40 UTC
She really is. I like to think of her last line as defiant, and almost proud (at least that's how I felt when I wrote it). :-)

Thank you so much for the comment! I really admire your work, so this means a lot to me. :-)

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