Fic - "It wasn't meant to be like this."

[wheelie47]

Title: “It wasn’t meant to be like this.”
Author: wheelie47
Rating: PG
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 3,615
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Luke and Noah meet in a different time and a different place.
Prompt: Can’t take my eyes off you.
Prompter: bijou1986
Prompt: “If you

Comments

[newhaven183]

Such beautiful/gritty imagery inside and out. Wonderful read.

[wheelie47]

Thanks for reading and for your kind words, Sue! I'm glad that imagery came through for you and that you enjoyed the read.

Many thanks!

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much for your kind words, Tom. It means such a lot coming from you that you enjoy my stories!

I'm so glad to read that you thought I'd got the lingo right! You're right, they had a few hair raising moments there but their future WILL be better for them.

Thanks again!

[scj0710]

Wow - I was drawn in from the beginning - this is unique and wonderful, Anne! Perfect mix of romance, drama and action/adventure. You bring the time and place completely to life. Don't even get me started on Luke and Noah - their love, tenderness and determination to live the life they want and deserve is beyond any words I can write here. Bravo!

[wheelie47]

Thank you so much, Stacey! You are always so kind and supportive in your reviews. It means such a lot.

I'm so glad to read that the time and the place came through for you in this as well as the connection between Luke and Noah. Nuke works in any universe!

Thank you!

[appassionata1]

My goodness Anne! Is it possible that your storytelling skills get better with every piece you write?! Well from what I've read of yours so far they range from brilliant to perfection. This amazing piece has left me absolutely breathless. I was drawn in and captivated by it. The emotions and images will stay with me forever. Thanks so much for sharing its beauty. Thanks for passing the baton to me and for the inspiring prompt. I'll do my best to live up to the high standards you have set :)

[wheelie47]

Thank you so much for your kind words, Faye. You're making me blush! It means such a lot coming from you.

I'm so pleased to read that the time and the place came through for you in this. I'm so happy that you connected with this story so much.

I have no doubt you'll do the prompt justice. I'm looking forward to reading it.

Thanks again!

[myalterego1]

Loved it. That's all. Just loved it.

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it!