FIC - Shipwrecked - Lost... but found (2/3)

[wheelie47]

Title: Shipwrecked - Lost... but found (2/3)
Author/Artist: Wheelie47
Beta: Valenti1965 - thanks for your support and encouragement, Louise!
Rating: NC17 (eventually)
Disclaimer: Don't own the boys!
Characters/Pairings: Van and Jake (JANSIS)
Word Count: approx 10,500 (in total)
Warnings: A little bit of angst.
Summary: Van and Jake are shipwrecked on a desert island.

Comments

[valenti1965]

What an action packed chapter! Aaaahhhh those snakes freak me out!! Big time! So yeah I did rather love Van chopping its head off and kudos for eating it ha ha. So,,,jake gave into his feelings , only for Luke to push him away :-O noooooooo!! :

[wheelie47]

Thanks Louise! Glad you liked the drama! But ugh! I'm with you on the snakes. Shudder!

Yep - Jake finally gets up the courage to kiss Van and Van pushes him away! No wonder he ran.

Thanks for reading x

[buttercup32409]

Oh good Lord! I hate snakes. All kinds of snakes. Big ones, little ones, dead ones, or live ones they're all bad! *shudders* I think I would have had a heart attack on that boat!

I swear, those two are complete and utter boneheads when it comes to one another! For Pete's sake, he needs to turn his behind around and go back so he and Van can hash it out!

[wheelie47]

Thanks Nita! I'm with you... not a fan of snakes at all!

Absolutely - these two need their heads banging together because they can't see what's in front of their faces.

Thanks for reading!

[sarahsezlove]

Wow!
There's so much going on, it's unreal. This is so full of excitement, fear, tension, humour...you name it, it's all here.
And I love it!

Now...all I need is for Jake to shift into reverse and get back to Van.

[wheelie47]

Thanks Sarah! Yep - everything but the kitchen sink lol. Glad it worked for you!

Absolutely - Jake needs to turn around and sort it out with Van.

Thanks for reading!

[123cariad]

Wow Anne I am exhausted lol so much packed into one perfect chapter xx

[wheelie47]

Phew! And breathe again, Stella lol. Glad you liked it and thanks for reading and commenting! xx

[jb1183]

Wow, Anne, this reads like a great action movie. There's really NOTHING scarier than snakes! Now I'm looking forward to the NC-17 part. You always deliver on those! :)

[wheelie47]

Thanks Jim! Glad all the drama and action worked for you. And yep - I'm with you there on the snakes! Shudder!

Hope you like the NC17 part ;)

Thanks for reading!