FIC - First Knight (14/?)

Feb 28, 2013 17:30

Title: First Knight (14/?)
Author: wheelie47
Artist hollyoaks1021
Rating: NC17 (not for every chapter)
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 3,111
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Set in the fictional land of feudal Western Atlantia, King Damian has been overthrown and has fled the ( Read more... )

alternative universe, atwt, luke, fanfiction, noah

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newhaven183 February 28 2013, 22:38:43 UTC
oh anne... your characters' such envitable qualities of love and power and your attention to painting this beautiful word picture continues during this chapter... (was there ever any doubt). Loved the wake up scene in particular.

have enjoyed reading this story so much and am sadden by this feeling that the next chapter may indeed by the finale.

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wheelie47 March 8 2013, 08:50:05 UTC
Ah thanks so much, Sue. I think this is probably the fastest paced story with the most action and drama I've probably done so I like to give them scenes like that just slow it down and of course to give them a bit of alone time!

And fear not. The next chapter won't be the last. It is drawing to a close but it's not done yet!

Thanks so much for your continued support. It means so much.

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123cariad March 1 2013, 10:50:22 UTC
As always a wonderful chapter you know I love this story so much .. such a unique take on our Nuke love it xxx

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wheelie47 March 8 2013, 08:52:03 UTC
Thanks so much for your wonderful comment and your support, Stella. It means so much to me. I think this is about the most AU story I've ever done so I'm so glad you're enjoying it. xx

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random_nic March 3 2013, 01:52:51 UTC
Another excellent installment! With new forces on their side, it looks like our heroes' luck really has turned a corner!

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wheelie47 March 8 2013, 08:54:46 UTC
Thanks so much, Nic. You're a sparkling star!

Yep they have more forces but old evil Damian isn't done just yet!!

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boriqua522 March 6 2013, 04:22:52 UTC
omg! i can't believe i missed this update. if i hadn't gone on nukefic, i wouldn't have even known! shame on me ;] i loved that they woke up together, that was so freaking sweet. our poor boys seem to have many more obsticles in the way. you aren't going to make it easy for them, are you? either way, i can't wait for the next chapter. i'm still hoping luke runs a sword right through damian ;} kinda evil of me, but hey, he hurt noah. please continue, i'll be sure to keep updated.

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wheelie47 March 8 2013, 09:24:06 UTC
Lol no worries. I'm just glad you found it and even happier that you liked it. I didn't realise you were on Nukefic too. I read a lot of stories over there.

I'm so glad you liked the waking up scene. I wanted to give them a bit of quiet time.

Yes they do have more obstacles in their way. Damian is one of them!

I'd like to run Damian through with a sword if I was Luke too especially after what he has put them through.

Thanks for reading and commenting!!

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crownroyal_51 March 7 2013, 16:57:47 UTC
So happy the boys have help and that they are on the mend. Looking forward to reading about the rest of their adventures!

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wheelie47 March 8 2013, 10:24:27 UTC
Thanks for reading, Dawn.

Yep they have help but Damian isn't done yet!

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