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whatisair

Love Paradise

Feb 28, 2011 01:21

Title: Love Paradise ; one of the sequels to Confessions
Author: whatisair / oohprettyboys
Pairing: Hyunseung/Junhyung
Rating: NC 17
Summary: Junhyung tops. And Hyunseung's not gonna say no.
A/N: YESH I finally finished this 2nd sequel to Confessions. Honestly, I find it a little better than the 1st seq but it still sucks. But prz enjoy~ And oh, they ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, pairing: junhyung/hyunseung, #fanfiction

Comments 21

jhhs_1505 February 27 2011, 17:24:10 UTC

1ST SPOT! MUAHAHAHA! <3

jhhs_1505 February 28 2011, 02:28:26 UTC

kekeke the paradise...pfft! Made laughed out loud in the middle of the nite. XD Kekeke! Great job dongsaeng!! I c improvement in ur smut. XD jus...u stil seem a lil shy. Keke! Its ok, its enough since u rit fluff better. XD Kekeke! Yay, i nomnomed tis for breakfast<3

whatisair March 1 2011, 14:11:10 UTC

xD I WAS LISTENING TO VIU!! So got luv paradise idea pop into my mind hehe. >< i still don.t really dare to use direct words la.. Aish i think i'll never get used to writing smut. X_X aja aja!

jhhs_1505 March 1 2011, 14:17:22 UTC

dongsaeng ar...u usin hp reply ar? hahaha!!! u laggin ar? tio spam. kekeke!!!

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noodlesyummy February 27 2011, 17:50:08 UTC

2nd spot?

noodlesyummy February 27 2011, 17:51:03 UTC

done with reading lol !! omo next time?? is there next time *___*
hints of dooseob and kiwoon <33

write moarr ok :D :D

whatisair March 1 2011, 14:14:56 UTC

x_x i think i'll die if i need to write a 'next time'! >< jun needs to go train up his manliness first keke so he can show seung. Keke i try try but don.t think it'll be smut x_x sankyuu~

marnidoo February 27 2011, 18:59:01 UTC

Great! Top!Jun <3
I'm glad you finally wrote it! :) I gotta go but I'll read it as soon as I can

marnidoo February 27 2011, 21:50:36 UTC

Definitely worth the waiting :D
I love the ending haha
Great job~~ <3

whatisair March 1 2011, 14:17:07 UTC

xD Was it now? Keke 8)↲Sleepy seungie.. <3 thank you, for you~ xD HUR.

teenageisland February 27 2011, 20:45:44 UTC

lmfao junnie's "paradise"
that bamf would

loved it~

whatisair March 1 2011, 14:18:25 UTC

i want a paradise like that too.. Except it won't be full of coke, but beast xD thank you much very~

leejaehwa7 February 27 2011, 20:53:47 UTC

that was smexy...just plain hot...i can imagine jun trying to be manly but being afraid to bottom

poor exhausted hyunseung...but who could resist junhyung ^_^

great job hun ;)

whatisair March 1 2011, 14:20:39 UTC

jun has the constant fear of seung flipping him over and being top instead XD MORE FUN FOR SEUNG~ keke needy jun can never be resisted. ^^ thanks!