Day 40

[atrata]

Comments

[gaycrow]

I think I need to wait until perverse_idyll posts some feedback, and then write "What she said".

Until then, though, perhaps I can manage to get out that I'm so glad you're posting this. Your writing is very special indeed, and stays with me long after I've finished reading.

I'm printing each entry out, and I'm eagerly looking forward to each new day in the lives of your unwillingly caring Snape and dark Harry.

[atrata]

I'm glad I'm posting it, too! And glad you're still reading. :)

[rexluscus]

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God that was hot and intense.

You know, what I love about your Snape here is that he turns every moment into an educational opportunity. Even when he's talking Harry out of his embarrassment over coming too soon. Everything he says is a test, a riddle, an invitation to some kind of understanding. Even during sex. Another thing that makes their relationship so electric is the speed at which is shifts from tenderness to violence. I mean, one moment Snape's got Harry pinned to the wall by his throat, and the next, he's holding and comforting him. And it's not just Snape being unpredictable - he's reacting to Harry's volatility as well. They're just two elements that explode when they touch each other. It's so great!

I have a deadline in two hours and I still couldn't resist reading this chapter. Have I mentioned I'm so glad you're still writing this fic? *happy sigh*

[atrata]

You know, that's a very good point about Snape turning everything into a learning opportunity. I hadn't thought about it that explicitly, but you're quite right. Hmmm...

Anyway, I'm glad you're along for the ride. :)

[rexluscus]

Along for the ride? I'm the groupie in the back of the bus, man! ;-)

[snarryforever]

You are just beyond brilliant. I truly mean this. I am deep in another community but have become addicted to S/H and have read almost all - your Snape is seriously the best around. And I adore the plot concept of dark!Harry. Bravo.

[atrata]

Well, I dunno about my Snape being the best around, but thank you very much for your kind words. :)

[ariadneelda]

I was so happy to see another update so soon! I had to do other things and put them off to read this. *g* It was fantastic! I'm amazed how you can do this: you don't need to have them have sex for it to be hot; even when they just talk it's sizzling. The intensity of their interaction, guh! Like an explosion waiting to happen. It seems Snape is getting more and more attached, or should I say addicted, to Harry, something he'd hate to admit even to himself. *g* The darkness inside Harry is fascinating, I can't wait to see where that will lead him - will lead both of them. And whether Ron and Hermione will figure out what's happening to Harry, and the exact nature of Harry and Snape's relationship. That should be really interesting. *snicker* And I can't help saying it again: I LOVE your Snape. I love the way you write him treat and act towards Harry. God, I'm so happy you're writing this. :D

[atrata]

Heh. I'm not sure where it's going to lead them, either! But there are definitely a lot of open questions that are going to take me a long time to answer. I'm not sure if I'm happy about that, or dreading it. *grin*

Anyway, glad to have you aboard!

[svartalfur]

I simply love the way your Harry and Severus interact. Rex has already said it, the sudden shift from violence to caring is very intriguing. The way Severus comforts Harry is so wonderfully IC, and I love that you make Harry see it. Oh, and the sex is incredible hot. That Harry's come drips down Snape's legs while he talks to the headmaster, fantastic. A great piece of writing, I can't wait for more.

[atrata]

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the ride so far. :)