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SG-1 Fic: A Loose Bolt in a Complete Machine (PG-13) (4/5)

Jun 22, 2009 17:55

Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Title: A Loose Bolt in a Complete Machine (4/5)
Author: Em
Rating: PG-13 for language and violence
Word Count: ~50,000 (in 5 parts)
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Summary: SG-1 returns to Tekhne to extract Gerard, the inventor of the Vinculum (in Jack-speak, "internet in the brain"). But the mission goes south when Daniel is captured. ( Read more... )

dawes, fanfic:sg-1, sg-1:season7, jack, jacob, gerard, jack/daniel, teal'c, fanfic, slash, series:loose bolt, daniel, sam, slash:sg-1

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akasha_lilian June 23 2009, 17:51:02 UTC

"I'd do it if I have to," Jack said. "I'm fond on your ass."

fond of his ass I presume! ;-P

Daniel glanced to Jack

That should be at, shouldn't it?

And damn, I should have known you wouldn't torture Daniel physically, but be even meaner. That's not nice feeding of Daniel's misery and build up a world on that...no that's very evil in fact!
But damn, poor Jacob...=/ This reminds me a bit of Tad Williams' Otherland. Have you read it?

akasha_lilian June 23 2009, 17:54:32 UTC

Oh and Sam hugging her P90 like a teddybear? Now that was an awesome imagery and great characterization all at once in a simple sentence. Beautiful!

theemdash June 24 2009, 01:37:19 UTC

Hee. I liked that image.

theemdash June 24 2009, 01:36:48 UTC

Thanks for catching those pesky typos. In 50K, it's hard to catch everything even with the best beta readers. ;)

I am notoriously mean to my favorite characters. I like angst.

This reminds me a bit of Tad Williams' Otherland. Have you read it?

Oh, no I haven't. I feel a book rec coming on, though. ;)

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