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SG-1 Fic: Five Ways Daniel Tells Sam That He's Been Sleeping With Jack (R)

Jul 04, 2007 11:47

Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Title: Five Ways Daniel Tells Sam That He's Been Sleeping With Jack
Author: Em
Rating: R
Word Count: ~760
Characters/Pairings: Sam, Jack/Daniel, Sam/Daniel
Spoilers: "Lost City," vague and general for Season 9
Prompt: Five ways Daniel tells Sam that he's been sleeping with Jack. from sg1_five_things (Originally posted here)
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fanfic:sg-1, sg-1:season7, het:sg-1, sg-1:season3, sg-1:season4, jack/daniel, slash, sg-1, daniel, het, sam, daniel/sam, sg-1:season9, slash:sg-1

Comments 36

tamanth July 4 2007, 16:51:37 UTC

"I've been screwing Jack for the past year. He's a stallion."
*splorf*
He has way too much fun :D

#3 is so uncomfortable, but it just fits that their sex lives can't be simple, either.

theemdash January 6 2008, 01:51:37 UTC

I really enjoyed writing #3. I thought it was kind of perfect that everything accidentally fell apart.

(Sorry this comment is so late, but I do like letting everyone know that I read and enjoyed their comments.)

_minxy_ July 5 2007, 01:15:00 UTC

I love that not once do they yell at each other. It seems like no matter how it came out, that they'd still be close and they are in this. Lovely.

Love them sleeping together and getting the past acknowledged first. That was lovely.

theemdash January 6 2008, 01:52:41 UTC

Thanks. It seemed out of character for Sam to not notice the chemistry between Jack and Daniel (I'm sure everyone in the SGC has wondered about them).

fifthhouse July 5 2007, 01:16:45 UTC

She ducks her head, strawberry-scented hair tickling his nose. No, no. Not strawberry. She's more an earthy lavender or a fresh melon. Strawberry is too...I dunno. She's a clean, not a fruit. ;) (But it was an INSTANT sensory experience - so nice work!)

theemdash January 6 2008, 01:53:50 UTC

I think it's funny that you recommend fresh melon and then say she's not a fruit. ;) But I like the idea of fresh melon. I definitely wanted something soft and subtle.

ewanspotter July 5 2007, 04:16:52 UTC

Excellent. I like how you also didn't vilify Sam all that much. I mean, she's my least favorite, but I don't think she's evil.

theemdash January 6 2008, 01:55:05 UTC

I don't like it when Sam is vilified. There's no point in doing it because she's not a villain.

(Glad you liked it and sorry this comment is so late!)

ewanspotter January 6 2008, 02:33:34 UTC

Late? Heh. It's pretty Jurassic.

theemdash January 6 2008, 02:36:57 UTC

Shh. Just be glad that I'm going through and getting myself together around here. ;)

audrich July 15 2007, 08:30:28 UTC

Great! Love the meanage a trois going on.

Of course she knows ;D

theemdash July 15 2007, 11:29:56 UTC

Yeah, I love the idea that she actually knows. (It's not like she wouldn't notice, really.)