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SG-1 Fic: Bad Timing (NC-17)

Aug 07, 2006 07:25

Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Title: Bad Timing
Author: Em
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~4380
Spoilers: "Forever in a Day," "Meridian," and general spoilers for "Fallen" and "Avalon"
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Prompt: "I can read your mind and I know your story"; "Possible she wants you too, there is one way to ask her" (or "him," as the case may be)
010. Years ( ( Read more... )

fanfic:sg-1, sg-1:season7, jack, sg-1:season3, jack/daniel, sg-1:season5, fanfic, slash, sg-1, daniel, slash:sg-1, sg-1:season9

Comments 82

janedavitt August 8 2006, 02:46:43 UTC

Loved this one so much; thank you for the advance read! They got there in the end, which is all that counts.

theemdash August 9 2006, 14:15:45 UTC

I'm glad this whole thing worked out. The night before I posted I started thinking about adding to it and I screamed at myself. Heh.

Eventually time wears down all things? I think it's funny because in the first one they're on the same page about it being wrong, in the second it's more like Daniel is "resisting," in the third it's all Jack, and then in the fourth. . . . I actually hadn't planned that; those boys did it on their own.

not_sally August 8 2006, 03:49:57 UTC

*hugs OTP to heart*
Lovely fic.

theemdash August 9 2006, 14:53:01 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it; our entertainment is their pain. ;)

green_grrl August 8 2006, 20:30:18 UTC

There is so much OUCH in this fic!!! Even their happy ending is so, so far from perfect. *hurts for the boys*

Although watching General O'Neill getting bitch slapped with roses and chocolate is pretty damn funny. Hee!

theemdash August 9 2006, 14:55:12 UTC

There is so much OUCH in this fic!!!

Oh, don't I know it. "Forever in a Day" and "Meridian" in the same fic? It's just cruel. At least they have each other-in whatever capacity they have each other. ;)

Although watching General O'Neill getting bitch slapped with roses and chocolate is pretty damn funny. Hee!

*snickers* That's Jack for you. ;)

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theemdash August 9 2006, 14:57:18 UTC

I'm glad the angst with a happy ending works for you. At first I thought it was too happy and then I realized it probably balances the angst from the beginning. ;)

Jealousy is the one thing that spurs Jack to take possession of his spacemonkey. And that's pretty much canon, too. His reaction to Kera in "Past and Present" is more than healthy friendly concern. ;)

melayneseahawk August 9 2006, 16:08:51 UTC

Aww, I love it!

They're doomed, though, aren't they?

theemdash August 9 2006, 17:50:55 UTC

Are you kidding? These guys.

Entirely doomed. ;)