Jacobellis v. Ohio Part 1: For Will in Us is Overruled by Fate

Feb 24, 2011 23:11

Title: Jacobellis v. Ohio Part 1: For Will in Us is Overruled by Fate
Rating: R
Acknowledgement: Glee’s creators built the playground, I’m just playing around until they tell me I have to go home.
Spoilers: This was conceived (and in part written) back during the hiatus. I’m sure some things wormed their way in for characterization purposes because I ( Read more... )

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caveatempty February 25 2011, 05:40:36 UTC
WOOT!

Now to read....

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what_larks February 25 2011, 05:48:30 UTC
Gosh you're quick. Also, I kept the title, kind of just for you ;).

Hope you enjoy it!

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caveatempty February 25 2011, 05:58:05 UTC
...many half formed thoughts in my head, so I will wait until part 2 before lobbing them. (I'm glad you kept the title and love the subtitle.) Know what I like? The fact that Kurt and Blaine each think he could and should and want to be in love with the other, but don't realize (yet?) that he already is, or will be. That internal push/pull is strangely relate-able. I also don't know how to explain it.

I just logged on, and there you were at the top!

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what_larks February 25 2011, 12:49:01 UTC
I'm glad you like that part. Kurt spends so much time pining, both in cannon and in fic, I wanted to try a piece where he doesn't.

Also, I'm overly fond of the subtitles in this piece, my only regret is that I didn't manage to work in Milton.

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jsorolla February 25 2011, 05:49:23 UTC
Wow. Your writing style is really powerful. I love Kurt in this, and the idea that they slowly get to a relationship. More, please!

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what_larks February 25 2011, 12:54:32 UTC
Awww, thanks. I'm physically incapable of writing a relationship that's not a slow build (or writing it well anyway) so there's much more of that tension to look forward to, I promise.

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thiscalamity_x February 25 2011, 05:59:40 UTC
This was really awesome. I look forward to more :)

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what_larks February 25 2011, 12:56:57 UTC
*grins* Thanks!

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chouxi February 25 2011, 06:15:12 UTC
Kurt is stubborn in here. Kinda admire that. Sad about Kurt's dilemma. Though, I eat angst up...

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what_larks February 25 2011, 12:56:22 UTC
"Though I eat angst up" -- yeah, there will be much more to feed you before this whole thing is over.

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carapheonix February 25 2011, 07:08:33 UTC
Amazing~ Please update soon this is sooo awesome. I need some realistic BlainexKurt. Now I just need to find some BlainexKurt where Blaine has to convince Kurt to go out with him and my quota will be set! Lmfao, but yeah seriously, this is sooo amazing. Please update soon. I'll be waiting anxiously until then.

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what_larks February 25 2011, 12:51:14 UTC
Thank you! It won't be exactly what you're looking for, but I will say that I think you might enjoy part 2 ;).

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