Dismantle the Sun

[what_alchemy]

Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Beta: notboldly
Brit-picker: the_physicist
Rating: R
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Word Count: ~8,100
Warnings: suicidal ideation
Disclaimer: Property of Gatiss and Moffat. No money made, no copyright infringement intended.

Summary: John wants to blame Moriarty. Kitty Riley. The press. The Yard. Lestrade. Anderson and Donovan. Bloody Mycroft. But John

Comments

[what_alchemy]

XD thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. Third part's gearing up to be long, so I can't give you an ETA on it just yet.

[wind_hover]

This is lovely. I like the contrast in the last scene between Mycroft's reaction now and his first reaction to Sherlock's first death - how broken he is. And the whittling - the whittling is lovely.

And when he realises that Sherlock is alive - that's beautiful.

(And now I want Molly to take over Mr. Norbury or something - his grand-daughter? Dealing with wood?)

I like the bit about Ella: “What do you hope to get out of these sessions with me?” - it feels like the question marks a turning point in John's life, an actual finding of purpose.

[what_alchemy]

Thanks so much! I had to make Mycroft whittle ;)

[chell1]

That's fantastic!!!
I can't wait for the resolution! My heart broke for Mycroft and John, and I'm really hoping for a happy ending!

[what_alchemy]

You'll just have to wait and see ;)

Thanks so much!

[syien_island]

The ending is what really sealed this for me.

[what_alchemy]

:) I'm glad. Thanks so much.

[uwsannajane]

Oh, my God, brilliant. I love what you've done with this story!

[what_alchemy]

Thanks so much!