Comments | wgs_happyending: Part Five

whirl_gig in wgs_happyending

Part Five

Oct 02, 2009 02:19

In which Ron has a pet rock named Lester.
Rated R for language.
Icon used in this post by ajcher ( The last time he did that she had asked whether he ate them for breakfast and Ron had given a sort of half-hearted nervous laugh and she had sighed and pulled out another one, handing it to him before turning away. Ron had fled. )

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ginevrawp October 1 2009, 17:14:33 UTC

Oh my God. So good. I love your Ron, he's so funny and nervous and boyish and Ronnish and gah!
“Hi Charlie,” Ron sighed heavily, casting a furtive look at the girl who had now thankfully resumed her work, though she still shook her head and occasionally tutted. Ron’s shoulders slumped a little at the sight. He hadn’t even known she was back from Italy until today and his heart might have skipped a beat when he was passing the library and he saw her nodding along earnestly to one of the staff, but that hadn’t been the reason - at all - that he had come in here. Honest. He had needed to like, get out books, and stuff. Yeah. Hilarious. Didn't think you'd be able to top yourself and then..
But what if she said no? What if she said no and then looked at him like he had crawled out of a nearby sewer? What if she said no, looked at him like he had crawled out of a nearby sewer and then laughed in his face? He would never be able to borrow another pen again, he would have to swap to Camomile St library (which wasn’t as nice or as big) and ( ... )

geminai5 October 1 2009, 17:20:51 UTC

I LOVE your icon! One of many favorite scenes in Love Actually. :)

ginevrawp October 1 2009, 17:25:52 UTC

Oh thanks! It's made by indecisive_icon. Most of my icons are from Love Actually, as it's one of my most favoritest!!1!one movies ever. Love it to pieces.

whirl_gig October 1 2009, 23:49:00 UTC

I know it's so gorgeous isn't it? That scene in the movie always makes my heart beat a little faster.

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geminai5 October 1 2009, 17:18:23 UTC

LMAO!!! Ron's panicked imaginings about "screaming at little children for disturbing his seashell arrangements" et al was inspired and utterly hilarious! :D And his delusional tennis = football because a ball is involved, LOL. And Ginny changing Ron's ringtone? Priceless...and very Ginny. :D

Seriously, this was SO awesome! Great fun to read. Totally made my morning. :)

whirl_gig October 1 2009, 23:52:39 UTC

hahaha thank you so much! I had fun with this one so I'm glad you liked it. Thank you soooo much for commenting it is better than sliced bread. *squishes your face*

rumpelsnorcack October 1 2009, 21:03:42 UTC

Awwwww your Ron is so adorable. Full of insecurities and yet so funny and sweet and all that as well. I also love Ginny being Ginny, hehe. I'm loving this story, and that's saying a lot because I generally don't like real world AU stuff.

whirl_gig October 1 2009, 23:54:28 UTC

RUMPEL! hello :) Thanks for your message, I'm writing back to it soon (I'm at work so I've got time -haha) I'm very very happy you like it, your opinion always means a lot to me:)
HARRY IS IN THE NEXT PART. It will be the best. You will swoon at my feet.
*is up herself*
haha jokes. Thank you for commenting:) is the best.

rumpelsnorcack October 2 2009, 00:10:13 UTC

Harry is in the next part!!!! *camps out in this story til he appears again* And I will totally swoon at your feet *nods*

siriuslyblack95 October 2 2009, 15:42:12 UTC

Just to add in a small comment here if i may.
Harry's in the next part!! Yayy
your Harry is just a tad cool 8)

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lemaljumellen October 3 2009, 05:56:20 UTC

omg I love this story sooo soo much!! I'm completely in love with the whole idea of it! Wow, I didn't even know you had updated it, I was still on the first chapter haha. What a welcome surprise to read four excellent chapters! I'm so glad that you're delving into the other HP characters and I just love your characterization of each of them so much!
Poor Neville, it's obvious that Parvati likes him he probably just threw her off with his look of surprise. I love the fact that Luna called Ginny on her back fetish, that was hilarious. Charlie with Parkinson is just the best, I love how Charlie's studying to be a Vet and how Bill is a banker! Priceless hahah.
Neville's character is awesome too. I also love how Ron is still hopelessly in love with Hermione, aw the poor dear lol.
I hope Harry comes back soon for a massage!!

I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is fantastic!!

whirl_gig October 4 2009, 05:33:59 UTC

Wow thankyou!!! I'm so happy you like it:) I've been having alot of fun writing this so i'm always happy to hear that people are enjoying it, it makes me grin uncontrollably.
Harry definitely comes back soon for a massage.
*SQUISH*

mac_beth13 October 4 2009, 19:44:48 UTC

OMG, I love your Ron! He's so funny and his mind takes hilarious tangents. His insecurity and shyness make for an entertaining read and it's funny because he really didn't get a chance to do anything but make an ass of himself infront of Hermione and that is *so* Ron! Well Ginny helped with that, lol!
"Oh, piss it. He might as well start growing that beard." LMAO. You have some of the best chapter ending lines ever!
Can't wait to read about Harry in the next chappie! :D

whirl_gig October 5 2009, 05:41:48 UTC

ahahahah yay! I felt so sorry for him while I was writing this, but do not be alarmed, he will win her in the end. OR WILL HE???? haha.
I am still tidying the next one up but it is taking forever because RL keeps getting in the way. Sometime this week though:) *promises*
MWA