To Ride A Pale Horse: Ch 16: Kiss

[athenewolfe]

To Ride a Pale Horse
by Athenewolfe and WeyrWolfen
Chapter Sixteen: Kiss

Summary:

I see no man on a pale horse, yet Death rides for us all. It was the apocalypse no one saw coming. Now, longtime enemies must become allies, friends become foes, and death really is waiting around every corner. A tale of death, sacrifice, more death, the human (

Comments

[rebcake]

So much exciting information in this chapter! Willow, and Cordy, and Dawn, oh my! I loved Angel's hilarious mental contortions. So clueless about his inner workings, that guy. I do hope Dawn's heart won't be broken by that scheming cowboy. If any body can bring out his better qualities, it would be her, but is he worth it?

I can't be the only one waiting for Oz and Nina to meet up, right? I just know she'll feel lots better.

[slaymesoftly]

Great new chapter. Brings us up to speed on almost everybody. Of course, at this rate, the number of characters to be brought up to speed on is shrinking rapidly, isn't it? ROFL. So not funny, Patti! People are dying! *smacks self in face* Wonderful addition to this amazing story. :)

[cafedemonde]

Excellent, excellent, excellent! So glad to see this again. I went looking for an updat yesterday and was sad to find none, but remembered how busy yall are and couldn't be too upset.

So to see this today is a definite treat. Thank you!

Now, just love how everyone's world is ending or the world is ending itself, but they trudge on. I hope WIllow finds Xander and soon and he's okay. Will anyone find Faith?

And the Andrew/Christie moment was adorable.

Dawn laying lips on Linsdey was like Whoa! He is so right to be afraid of that little girl. She will be his end. Spike aint playing and Buffy will be worse and he forgets Angel who will be reacting on Buffy's behalf and Angel already hates him. Love how he diverted it to Eve. I'd love to see that smackdown. Cuz Eve always needs a smackdown.

Again the OCs are so believeable and we get just enough backstory to care but not be bored or overloaded.

[raemcn]

Wonderful! Perfect! Awesometasticness! MORE!

Sorry this isn't longer, too tired.

[pfeifferpack]

Excellent chapter