[fic] Zhombies of London | 25

[girl_starfish]

Sorry this chapter took so long! I suck.

Un-betaed, and probably chock-full of errors as its been so long since I've written on this. ^^;

Comments

[jamjar]

Protect Bart from the predations of lecherous artists, Kon! Now if only he could stop Bart leading him astray. And not the good kind of astray, either.

I'm so glad you're writing -and posting- this again.

[brown_betty]

The best part, for me is, in YJ it was all about Tim trying to hold Bart and Kon back. Hre, Bart and Tim are clearly corrupting Kon! It's all whimsical and stuff! Erm. Sorry. Yes.

Glad to see another instalment.

[szm]

Your back! Hooray! I'm glad your writing more of this cus it always makes me smile. Thank you.

[ever_faithful]

I missed you and I missed this story ! I am ever so glad you are back and are continuing this wonderful , captivating story.

[bibliokat]

YAYAYAYAY!!!!!!! You wrote more! You totally don't suck!

Ok, typos! Gosh, I actually missed this.

He and Bart conferred over their respective destinations, and decided that since they lay more or less upon the same route, Kon would accompany Bart to his artists before continuing on to make Drake’s delivery.

From the moment he viewed the french name attached to the rather dowdy looking studio flat, Kon had a bad feeling about the visit.

I think "french" should be capitalized.

I don’t suppose I could interest you in a souvenir paiting to take home with you? I also do portraits?”

Being bossed about while in a state of undress and a chilly flat by a man of dubious artistic merit and morals was not Kon’s idea of a good job, but as he opened his mouth to say this, be caught sight of Bart’s expression and sighed.

I like the story about Gambi, interestingly spooky.

And this line is awesome: Palpable as Tim’s displeasure was, Kon was not sure it would hold up against, say, gravity.

So glad to have you back!