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[fic] Zhombies of London | 16

Aug 25, 2005 08:15

Running late. Eek! Much thanks to jamjar for her help with this chapter!

( This is turning out to be quite a night for our heroes. )

au, vampyre, kon, tim, bart

Comments 27

dizzycadence August 24 2005, 23:47:50 UTC

Roy as a coyote-were is perhaps one of the cutest (and most appropriate) things ever. Though he was raised Dineh, right? Navajo? Poor boy must have a lot of angst - Navajo view Coyote as the embodiment of just about everything evil/bad. *pats Roy and gives him ear-scratchies*

(Obey Bart! XD)

girl_starfish August 25 2005, 00:29:56 UTC

Really? I did not know that. You're right, it does raise a lot of possibilities -- ack! No more bunnies! I have quite enough at present.

(Resistance is futile!)

minervasolo August 25 2005, 00:48:43 UTC

Yes, terribly unnatural acts, Kon. You definitely need to go and defend Drake from the unnatural acts he might be compelled to commit. By Bart. Be compelled to commit by Bart. Off you go now.

Also, much love for Drake's reaction to the cabbie legging it. He's frekaing out, but the legalities of the situation are his only outlet for it. I can just picture him ringing the agency in the morning too, though quite how he'd explain what happened I don't know!

girl_starfish August 25 2005, 01:03:00 UTC

Kon is nothing if not a gentleman. It is his sworn duty to go participate in prevent any gross miscarriages of decency and morality. Really.

Hee. Tim will have his revenge! Thanks for your comments, I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter!

marag August 25 2005, 02:14:57 UTC

::snicker:: Yes, Kon, you just keep telling yourself that. We all believe you. ::snerk:: And Tim just cracks me up.

girl_starfish August 25 2005, 02:22:02 UTC

^_^ Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.

brown_betty August 25 2005, 04:17:53 UTC

"who knows what unnatural acts he might compel you to do!"

Only if we're lucky!

Oh, man, every time I think you're going to end it and leave me moping about for more, you just get them into more trouble. [bites fingernails]

girl_starfish August 25 2005, 04:40:40 UTC

^_^ Your comment made me feel very evil, in an extremely good way. Thank you!

jamjar August 25 2005, 06:56:30 UTC

There's so much to love in this scene; the wolves... well, the lupines, anyway (and yay for coyote!Roy), the interaction between Kon and Tim and Kon and Mia, the suggestion of unnatural acts, the compulsions...

*does the dance of knowing that it's going to get better*

girl_starfish August 25 2005, 11:23:28 UTC

*loves you.* I have to say, the suggestion of unnatural acts is my favourite part.