Uh oh. Rose is going to misread that offer, isn't she?
Nice reworking of the John Hart storyline. Made a bit more sense than the actual episode, but then I don't watch Torchwood for its lucid story lines. ;)
Well, I suppose the first question is what exactly is the offer ;)
I hated the storyline in Exit Wounds, apart from thinking it made no sense whatsoever. It would have made much more sense to me had Hart been the villain all along. So, when I decided I was going to utilise it - and it seemed to make sense to, as I'd used several of the big storylines I was unhappy with in TW S2 - I knew I was going to lose all the stuff I hated *grin*
Yes, Hart died. I disliked him thoroughly, though, so you won't find me weeping any tears *grin* And I thought writing him as a psycho was the only way of making sense of his character.
Yes, chapter 11 will indeed be the final. Thank you! And especially for wanting more :)
Oh noes! Nice one Doctor...Rose is sure to be feeling rejected now! Loved the dealings with Captain John and how the Doctor allowed a little of Ka Faraq Gatri to show up to terrify him! Are you really going to wrap this up in just one more chapter? They haven't even all gotten "together" yet!
I think Rose has been feeling rejected all the way through, really, though she's trying not to.
The Doctor can turn on the scary at the drop of a hat when he needs to. He doesn't even need to get shouty, just very cold and very calm and completely unblinking. I love it :)
And, yes, just one more chapter. Wrote the final sentences this morning :)
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Nice reworking of the John Hart storyline. Made a bit more sense than the actual episode, but then I don't watch Torchwood for its lucid story lines. ;)
*eagerly waits for the next chapter*
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I hated the storyline in Exit Wounds, apart from thinking it made no sense whatsoever. It would have made much more sense to me had Hart been the villain all along. So, when I decided I was going to utilise it - and it seemed to make sense to, as I'd used several of the big storylines I was unhappy with in TW S2 - I knew I was going to lose all the stuff I hated *grin*
Thank you!
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Aw, John died. He was appropriately batty and Jack-obsessed though, muy bien. =)
Eagerly awaiting the next and, dare I say it, final chapter. (Noo, it can't be over already...)
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Yes, Hart died. I disliked him thoroughly, though, so you won't find me weeping any tears *grin* And I thought writing him as a psycho was the only way of making sense of his character.
Yes, chapter 11 will indeed be the final. Thank you! And especially for wanting more :)
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Update soon x
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And the final chapter will be along soon :)
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Loved the dealings with Captain John and how the Doctor allowed a little of Ka Faraq Gatri to show up to terrify him!
Are you really going to wrap this up in just one more chapter? They haven't even all gotten "together" yet!
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The Doctor can turn on the scary at the drop of a hat when he needs to. He doesn't even need to get shouty, just very cold and very calm and completely unblinking. I love it :)
And, yes, just one more chapter. Wrote the final sentences this morning :)
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