Comments | wendymr: Finding Judas 8/9

wendymr

Finding Judas 8/9

Dec 22, 2006 21:42

Story: Finding Judas
Author: WMR
Rated: Mainly PG13, mostly for language, two chapters R, and those are labelled as such.
Characters: Tenth Doctor, Jack Harkness, Martha Jones, Rose Tyler
Spoilers: New series DW all the way to Doomsday, Torchwood more or less to Small World; Greeks Bearing Gifts if you squint. Note: I have made some assumptions ( Read more... )

hurt/comfort, tenth doctor, jack harkness, rose tyler, judas series, ot3

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altorogue December 23 2006, 02:56:03 UTC

Ohh, Jack . . . very lovely and bittersweet.

wendymr December 24 2006, 18:12:49 UTC

Thank you :) Yes, oh, Jack... :(

ladykoori December 23 2006, 03:24:50 UTC

AW!

Very sweet. *hugs everyone*

wendymr December 24 2006, 18:13:26 UTC

Thank you! I didn't expect 'sweet', not to this chapter, but if that's what it made you feel then I'm glad :)

dave7 December 23 2006, 04:02:47 UTC

Will be back to comment properly after the holidays, but in the mean time... *eg* I love it!

wendymr December 24 2006, 18:13:59 UTC

Thank you! I know how busy you are, so I'm delighted that you took the time even to read this :) Merry Christmas!

boji December 23 2006, 04:07:13 UTC

I had been planning to comment - at lenngth when the last part was done and I read it again as a cohesive whole. But, I have to say that this chapter - which surpasses all the rest in terms of how bang on your are with voice and with poignancy - compelled me to do otherwise.

This isn't an easy story to like because in terms of wish fullfillment we're all out of luck *but* that said, I think that this is the most cannonical/episodic piece of fanfic I've read. If there was going to be an OT3 reunion then this chapter would probably mirror how it ended. I'm thrilled that you gave Rose the independance we saw in Season One and that you extrapolated that so she seems like a young woman who is maturing well with a goood head on her shoudlers, and Jack - no matter how broken he is - knows where power and culpability lie and you show that beautifully too.

As I said, really, really cannonical. Though the Doctor doesn't come off well at all and I wonder what Martha is thinking of all this - out of shot as it were.

wendymr December 24 2006, 18:19:57 UTC

Thank you for such a lovely and thoughtful review. I really, really appreciate it so much and I've read it about half a dozen times ( ... )

prchung December 23 2006, 04:25:12 UTC

All right, you've got me! *cursing under breath*
I've been holding off, but I couldn't resist any longer-- The title alone pulled me in from the begining.

wendymr December 24 2006, 18:21:32 UTC

LOL! Sorry to make you curse! But it's lovely to know that you're reading :)

And, by the way, where's the next chapter of your story? *thumps desk impatiently* You've got a lot of eager fans getting very anxious waiting for more - I should know, because we're all saying so behind your back ;)

prchung December 24 2006, 18:38:56 UTC

I'm beating my head on my desk. I'm bound to my desk which is inconveniently positioned in the midst of the holiday-kids-out-school-baking-cookies-talking-chattering-arguing -- actually, as I write this they're all at it again, and I can barely complete a sentence... Someone come rescue me, please.

I've seriously considered commiting a crime just shy of a death sentence so I can be confined in a nice quiet maximum security cell... Maybe I'd get some writing done.

wendymr December 24 2006, 21:56:47 UTC

Ouch! Yes, I know a few other AWOL writers in your position. We'll just have to hope that you manage to grab a bit of time over the next few days to give us our next fix... please?

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