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wendymr

Dimensionally Transcendent 4/10?

Nov 14, 2007 21:03

Story: Dimensionally Transcendent
Author: wmr
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jack harkness, ninth doctor, angst, bigger inside series, rose tyler, fic

Comments 32

order_of_chaos November 15 2007, 05:00:05 UTC

Chapters so far: 4
Cliffhangers so far: 3 (WTF?)
Pancakes so far: Still none.

Favourite scene: Jack/Doctor/TARDIS
Other favourites: Rose translating Doctorese for Jack, Jack not believing the Doctor likes him, Rose not ending up seduced by Jack (mmmm, repercussions), and the deletion of criminal records.

wendymr November 18 2007, 03:45:07 UTC

Oh, you don't consider this a cliffhanger?

*offers you pancakes, with real Canadian maple syrup*

And I'm really glad you enjoyed the Jack/Doctor/TARDIS scene. Jack, of course, would flirt with the TARDIS ;) Glad you liked the rest, too!

order_of_chaos November 18 2007, 06:29:35 UTC

Nah - 'course not. They're two feet away from the edge at least, and the ground's not even crumbling yet.
And pancakes, with syrup! Made with real Canadians?

larielromeniel November 15 2007, 05:13:51 UTC

I just love this.

wendymr November 18 2007, 03:45:39 UTC

Thank you! :)

honorh November 15 2007, 05:18:43 UTC

You're building up the sexual tension so deliciously!

honorh November 15 2007, 23:01:47 UTC

BTW, I just love it that Rose's laugh is what really turns Jack on. It says so much about his personality.

wendymr November 18 2007, 03:47:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm really pleased that rings true for you. Jack's so much a man of the universe, so sexually-experienced, that I think so many different things would get him turned on, and not necessarily always the obvious :)

wendymr November 18 2007, 03:46:13 UTC

Thank you! I hope that continues, though it'll come and go as things get more... action-oriented ;)

dameruth November 15 2007, 06:16:55 UTC

Ah, Jack -- the way to a Doctor's heart is *definitely* through his TARDIS! XD Very much enjoying the character interactions here. Fond as I am of Ten, I really do wish we'd had a whole second season with Nine, and these two as the companions! Lacking that, though, there's always nifty fic like this. ;)

wendymr November 18 2007, 03:48:27 UTC

Oh, I couldn't agree more - we really, really needed a second season with Nine, and with both Jack and Rose on board. So glad you're enjoying this :)

annon_of_rhi November 15 2007, 06:28:11 UTC

Oh, I liked that little Jack/Rose moment in the gym, nicely done. I never could see Rose just up and forgiving him for turning the charm on and off like a tap, and making her feel so embarrassed and kind of slutty (that's what she feels in my head, anyway). I like that you showed she too has her reservations about him, even if they're not as noticeable as the Doctor's.

The "Jack/TARDIS, Doctor" scene was hilarious, too. :D

wendymr November 18 2007, 03:50:47 UTC

Oh, good! I agree; I think it would have taken Rose a while to forget how Jack manipulated her there, even if she'd forgiven him by the time they saved his life. There's liking him and there's being able to trust him :)

Glad you liked the Jack/TARDIS/Doctor OT3 scene too ;)