Lewis fic: If At First You Don't Succeed...

[wendymr]

Story: If At First You Don't Succeed...
Author: wendymr
Characters: James Hathaway, Robbie Lewis
Rated: G
Summary: Bet you never realised how difficult it is to buy a Valentine's Day present.

Written for the Valentine's Weekend Love Spectacular on lewis_challenge, and just squeaking in under the wire!

Comments

[rawa_02]

Grinning.

[wendymr]

Thank you! :)

[paperscribe]

I felt so terrible for James all three times he tried to do something special and was thwarted! The coffee was particularly sad; all that care going to waste on the floor.

But I ADORE that Lewis noticed all three of those things and worked it out. And the ending was perfect. Beautifully done! :D

[divingforstones]

The coffee moment really got to me, too. I was going "noooo..."

[bailangwang]

Same here. I also felt so sorry for him.

[wendymr]

Poor James - but I'm not sorry that I managed to make everyone feel sorry for him ;)

[jo02]

Oh - lovely !

[wendymr]

Thanks!

[pushkin666]

Oh I liked that a lot :) Yay for James trying to be subtle and Robbie totally noticing it. Lovely fic.

[wendymr]

Thank you - I'm really glad you liked it, and thank you for organising the challenge that prompted me to write this :) And, yes, no matter how subtle James tries to be, Robbie always notices *g*

[hab318princess]

oh, that was lovely

[wendymr]

Thank you very much :)