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cicerothewriter September 9 2012, 03:06:47 UTC
Brilliant! I love it. :0)

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wendymr September 9 2012, 16:49:47 UTC
Thank you!

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timberwolfoz September 9 2012, 03:14:42 UTC
I think you lost a tag somewhere: your entire /2 now looks like this.

I shall now mentally turn the volume down and read. :)

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wendymr September 9 2012, 03:38:05 UTC
Whoops! I completely forgot to check the formatting before I went off and did other things. Thanks for letting me know! Fixed now - too late for you, unfortunately :( Sorry!

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sarren September 9 2012, 05:19:08 UTC
Very cool. Love James' excuse at the end :)

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wendymr September 9 2012, 16:50:29 UTC
Thank you! He listens and learns, does James, and rarely misses an opportunity *g*

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emeraldsword September 9 2012, 07:55:05 UTC
oh, this was gorgeous, and that ending was spot on! Really nice thing to wake up to :-)

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wendymr September 9 2012, 16:50:54 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the ending :)

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flowerpotgirl September 9 2012, 10:40:10 UTC
Lovely, especially Robbie's thought about being the one left at home. They have all the pieces of the jigsaw, if only they would put them together. A fine example of leaving your job at the office - fine pair of detectives they are!

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wendymr September 9 2012, 16:52:32 UTC
Yes, they are missing the final pieces of the puzzle, aren't they? But they're getting closer, possibly ;) Glad you enjoyed it, particularly Robbie's realisation of what it felt like for Val being left behind while he went off to work.

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