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taffimai May 14 2007, 01:59:43 UTC
He’s gone. And, judging by this note, he’s not coming back.

*cries*

I'm clinging to the hope that part four has the Doctor coming back after all, and isn't just an epilogue.

This was wonderful, though.

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wendymr May 20 2007, 22:00:47 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. *passes tissues all the same*

Sorry I've been so slow with chapter 4! It's been a bugger to write - but it's finally all done bar the BRing. Coming soon!

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debs7 May 14 2007, 02:03:35 UTC
Oh. that chapter just killed me.

It was so haunting and sweet and I just want to hug the Doctor and never let him go.

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wendymr May 20 2007, 22:18:48 UTC
*revives you*

Well, you asked for this fic, so I hope you're getting something like what you wanted...

Thank you! :)

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scarlettgirl May 14 2007, 02:25:20 UTC
Ow, ow, ow!

This stings. But how much do I love that the Doctor had someone else in his life? I think it was lovely how you worked in that it was a sign of his healing and much improved mental state that he allowed someone else into his heart. It only makes sense and pleases me tremendously. I think the capacity for love, as has been proved with his relationship with Jack and Rose, can move beyond the boundaries of "one person forever" without diminishing the love that already exists.

Still, a tough chapter to read and I'm on pins and needles for the next bit!

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neadods May 14 2007, 02:57:12 UTC
how much do I love that the Doctor had someone else in his life?

Something I love as well. The Doctor has a near-infinite capacity for love; it's not like what he gives to one is taken away from another.

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wendymr May 20 2007, 22:42:46 UTC
The Doctor has a near-infinite capacity for love; it's not like what he gives to one is taken away from another.

Yes, very true. And since, in this series, he's travelling without Jack and Rose for periods of anything from two years to forty years or so, he's got to have other people with him. And - as we see - he can't help caring deeply for people he's with, whether it's agape or eros or a combination.

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neadods May 21 2007, 01:35:41 UTC
That is possibly one of the most depressing icons I've ever seen!

he can't help caring deeply for people he's with

It's one of his most attractive traits, really.

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foible May 14 2007, 02:39:30 UTC
Oh... *sniff*

That was heartrending. Beautiful. But... oh, so very sorrowful. You've manage to make me mourn a companion I've never met. Impressive. The characterization... the mood... the emotion... all so very well crafted -- powerfully so.

I don't think I've ever been so relieved to see three little letters, as I was to see "tbc." *g* This is one hell of a story and I can't wait to see where you will take it next. :)

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wendymr May 20 2007, 22:24:45 UTC
You've manage to make me mourn a companion I've never met.

Wow. That's an incredible compliment, and thank you very much! Especially as Lauren doesn't actually appear in the story; the Doctor's only talking about her in retrospect. Thank you :)

Yes, tbc - there is one final chapter, and it'll be posted as soon as I've finished replying to comments :) Thanks for your patience!

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pescivendolo May 14 2007, 02:51:45 UTC
Heartbreaking and wonderful. Great chapter!

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wendymr May 20 2007, 22:25:44 UTC
Thank you so much :)

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