Fic: Sphere of Influence 3/5?

[wendymr]

Story: Sphere of Influence
Author: wmr / wendymr 
Characters: Ninth Doctor, Jack Harkness, Rose Tyler
Rated: PG13
Summary: He’s like a magnet. A gravity well, sucking in everything within his sphere of influence, drawing them to him whether they like it or not.

Written for space_monkey52 in return for an extremely generous donation to the Queensland flood

Comments

[annissag]

Do you know how to write a cliffhanger or what?! :D

As I was reading this chapter, I was thinking how much I enjoy the way you write dialogue. Everything flows so naturally and I love reading the little vignettes. And then it occurred to me how you're moving the plot along with these conversations and it struck me how elegant this story is. And then *wham!* I got hit with the action! I'm finding this story thoroughly enjoyable!

[wendymr]

Cliffhangers are fun! Like lindenharp, I thrive on them. What's a chapter without a cliffhanger? *g*

And thank you very much! That is a wonderful compliment :)))

[othermewriter]

EEEEP! Oh man Jack you better be okay and Doctor you take good care of him now. Great story and perfect cliff hanger.

[wendymr]

Is Jack okay? Will the Doctor get a chance to take care of him? All will be revealed... ;)

[maniacalshen]

I really enjoyed the verbal weaving and tricks in this chapter. And the cliffhanger, yeep!

[wendymr]

Thank you very much :) In a chapter where not all that much happened until the end, it's lovely to hear that you found events in it to be enjoyable.

[canaana]

And yet, the cliffhanger here worries me so much less than the cliffhanger on the last chapter. ;-)

[wendymr]

It does, does it? Well, I'll be fascinated to see what you think of chapter 4's ending *g*

[heintz57]

Oh what a nice continuation, but damn woman do you have to leave us with such a cliff hanger. Really it is going to drive me crazy not knowing what happen to the handsome CPT Jack.

Update soon

[wendymr]

As I said upthread, what's a chapter without a cliffhanger?

Chapter 4 coming up very soon - but as for Jack, he's in a bit of trouble... *g*