Comments | wendymr: Fic: Emancipation 2/2

wendymr

Fic: Emancipation 2/2

May 30, 2010 17:07

Story: Emancipation
Author: wmr / wendymr
Characters: Tenth Doctor, Donna Noble, Jack Harkness
Rated: PG
Disclaimer: Characters all owned by the BBC and other recognised copyright-holders; no profit has been or will be made from their use in this work of fiction
Summary: Trust Donna to find trouble if it's there to be foundThis story was originally ( Read more... )

hurt/comfort, tenth doctor, jack harkness, donna, fic

Comments 18

ana_rpm May 30 2010, 22:44:44 UTC

Great story. :) Donna was awesome with the Chief. Go Donna! And I loved the conversation between Jack and the Doctor. :)

wendymr June 7 2010, 00:52:17 UTC

Thank you! I'm especially pleased that you like the Jack/Doctor conversation, and of course Donna had to be awesome :)

neadods May 30 2010, 23:16:07 UTC

Enjoyed it just as much as I did in the zine! :D

wendymr June 7 2010, 00:52:33 UTC

Thank you for reading it again!

honorh May 30 2010, 23:51:36 UTC

Ooh, I like! Love Doctor&Donna stories, and Jack was a fun extra. Love the flirting. I remember thinking, after "Exit Wounds," that if Jack hadn't understood the Doctor's forgiveness of the Master before, he would now. There are some people you just have to forgive, because if you don't, it'd be like not forgiving yourself.

wendymr June 7 2010, 00:55:16 UTC

Thank you! I really think that Jack would have made such a fun addition to the Doctor-Donna team. And he would have flirted with her; that whole refusing to hug her thing made no sense whatsoever, and wasn't remotely funny.

And, yes, I think Jack's seen enough and lived long enough to understand. In a way, it's why he's also able to forgive the Doctor.

maniacalshen May 31 2010, 01:05:32 UTC

It’s like something out of one of those Jane Austen serialisations, except she’s pretty sure that Mr. Darcy never used his tongue.

Bahahaha, oh, Jack.

Donna pockets the card, but shakes her head. “Nah, not likely. Give up travellin’ in time and space? I’ll need a Zimmer frame before I’d do that!”

T_T

Everyone was great in this fic. And it's nice to see them all getting along at the end.

wendymr June 7 2010, 00:56:20 UTC

Thanks so much for showing me the lines that made you smile! Humour is not a strong point of mine, so it's even more lovely that you picked those ones :)

juliet316 May 31 2010, 01:32:12 UTC

Very nice and lovely ending. The Destroyer, the Harridan, and the Thug indeed. ;-)

wendymr June 7 2010, 00:57:21 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked their nicknames :)