Auction ficlet: Team-Building

[wendymr]

Story: Team-Building
Author:   wmr   wendymr
Characters: Ninth Doctor, Jack Harkness, Rose Tyler
Rated: M. Oh, yes, M
Disclaimer: Did you see then doing anything like this on TV? No? Well, then
Summary: “You fancy Captain Flash.”

Written for the most generous Who fan around,

Comments

[plaid_slytherin]

This was wonderful. I love the way you're able to capture all three of their distinct voices and switch effortlessly between POVs. They all feel so real. And it's hot, too! Excellent job.

[wendymr]

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, including the POVs through the ficlet.

[simons_flower]

Written for wiggiemomsi, but I think we're all winners with this one. Holy hell, I'm feeling a bit light-headed and dry-mouthed myself. And it's a bit warm in here.

[wendymr]

LOL! Glad I could help :)

[mithrel]

Wow. This was perfect. Totally believable and in-character. I especially loved that final exchange between the Doctor and Jack.

[wendymr]

Thanks so much! I can never do just smut without some element of relationship/character-building, so I had to include that.

[editrx]

Oh, I do so love your Nine stories! This one was just what I needed today. :)

[wendymr]

Thank you! Glad I could help :)

[honorh]

Um, guh. Sexy sex. Very sexy sex. I'd swear you're getting better at this. Need water. And my bunk.

[wendymr]

You know, when I wrote this - and when I write just about anything including smut - I was convinced it was completely flat and lacking any remote sense of the erotic. Had to have it read by two people for reassurance on that before I was ready to post it. I am a hopeless judge of my own smut.

Thank you - I'm really glad it worked for you :)