Catch Me If I Fall

[welsh_scotsman]

written for the hc_bingo  (i'm getting good at these!) prompt 'fear of heights'. I'm not completely happy with how this came out so feel free to lie, tell the absolute truth. I  think I might rewrite it at a later date but it's here now. *hides under desk and disowns it*

Summary: Ianto knew working for Torchwood would take him to new heights, he just didn’t

Comments

[owensheart]

They say to overcome your fears you have to face them head on. and I think for Ianto thas about as head on as you get!

Lovely fic.

[welsh_scotsman]

Thank you =) wow, someone actually likes it, yay =) and you're right; you don't get more extreme than that =)

[space_monkey52]

This is absolutely perfect the way it is. :)

[welsh_scotsman]

thank you =) i wasnt sure if it worked with tension and so on so glad you approve =)

[missthingsplace]

Absolutely fabulous :)

[welsh_scotsman]

thank you=)

[hazelayes]

What's not to like? :)
Ianto in peril, Jack to the rescue, all written in character, with great pacing and tension leading to a satisfying ending that's warm without schmoop. I'll say it works! :D

[welsh_scotsman]

thank you, its funny that you thought the pacing and tension was good as those were the bits i wasn't so keen on; still, glad you liked and commented=)

[hazelayes]

Just goes to show authors can't control everything. Once it's out there, the reader's reading kind of completes it in its own way. :) It was good for me, anyway.

[aviv_b]

I wonder if he couldn't have stood on something tall and tricked them into thinking he was taller. yeah, I know, no fun in that.

[welsh_scotsman]

i did have him standing on the rim of the roof in the original version but then i just had this image of him standing on a beam far out from the building like that building that jack likes to stand on with the white sticky outty bit =)