The Great Holmes Swap - Part 4

[wellingtongoose]

Comments

[ext_1160121]

This story is remarkably entertaining, I do hope it continues soon because I'm considering joining this site purely so I can favourite this story and keep track of it. Excellent work so far, I couldn't stop grinning for so long my cheeks ache.

[wellingtongoose]

Thank you for the support! Do you mind me asking where you found this story? Just conducting a little poll.

There will be more hilarity and plot very soon.

[sherlock2040]

Haha!

I think Mycroft was messing with John, he knew that he'd pull it together and work it out eventually...doesn't mean he can't have fun (and he totally deserved being hit with the phone)

I look forward to more :))

[wellingtongoose]

Yes I have been wanting to bring Mycroft down a notch or two for a long time. More BAMF John to come!

[lotl101]

Great job! I can't wait for the next installment!

[wellingtongoose]

Thank you! Your comment has made my day. Mind if I ask how you found this little story? Just doing a small poll.

[lotl101]

I think I saw it on ff.net, just the first chapter, a while ago, and saw the updated version on sherlockBBC. (Sorry, new to lj, haven't figured out how to link to communities and whatnot yet)

[wellingtongoose]

Thanks for responding, I'm not a great fan of FF.net because there's so many restriction on formatting, but I'm very glad you found my story. Thanks for the support.

Yay! New Chapter!

[feirwyn]

I'm still giggling about John throwing the blackberry at Mycroft... I'm pleasantly surprised that Sally has a positive role in this story. I always felt like she wasn't developed enough. I'm still waiting on more awesome bamf!John and jealous!Sherlock! I've had pictures of secret agent John running around in my head dressed in black with his gun doing awesome parkour crap and then getting stuck in vents... My imagination doesn't like gary stues or mary sues very much.

Re: Yay! New Chapter!

[wellingtongoose]

I really like Sally, despite the more negative aspect of her portrayal. It's not easy to succeed in a very male dominated workplace like the Met Police, so I've always seen her as a very strong woman.

John the secret agent - your wish is going to be fulfilled very soon. He won't be dressed in black but he will be gunning down enemy spies like a proper spook until he gets stuck in a ventilation shaft...

[the_silverdoe]

I just read all four chapters and had a really good laugh. I love the case aspects and the characters are very well-written as well. Great work! =)

[wellingtongoose]

Thank you for the compliments! More action in the next chapter but hopefully I can keep up the humour. Mind if I ask where you found this little story? Just doing a poll.

[the_silverdoe]

I saw your post at sherlockbbc. :)

[wellingtongoose]

Thanks for responding! I shall post updates on the community in future :)