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FIC: Of Flowers and Dreams (PG) for vr2lbast

Nov 28, 2010 02:05

Author: Riisha
Recipient: vr2lbast
Title: Of Flowers and Dreams
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing(s): Ken, Kurumi, Mamoru, Aya-chan
Summary: Kurumi finds Ken planning for the holidays, while in Japan, someone settles some unfinished business.
Warnings: None
Word Count: 1861
Author's Notes: I... I merged the two prompts together. But I feel like I could have ( Read more... )

characters: shinjou kurumi, rating: pg, characters: fujimiya aya-chan, characters: hidaka ken, gift 2010, characters: takatori mamoru

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riisha December 24 2010, 15:30:22 UTC

Thank you! As soon as I had the two prompts picked, I thought maybe it was possible to put them together? I rearranged and reworded and I'm happy it worked out in the end. I was worried it might have become too sad considering it was the holidays. But I'm so glad you like it!

lady_ganesh December 22 2010, 03:23:41 UTC

Ouch. Nice work, and I really like the way you contrasted the stories and tones.

riisha December 24 2010, 15:31:53 UTC

I wondered if maybe the mood of the other half might have affected the tone of Ken and Kurumi but I guess it played out fine. Thank you for reading!

ambientlight December 24 2010, 17:23:23 UTC

Oh, this is an interesting contrast - I like how, even in the happier life Ken and Aya lead in England, the past doesn't quite leave them behind. And I particularly like Mamoru in this, especially when he remembers his life as Omi.

whymzycal January 1 2011, 06:30:55 UTC

Ooh, I really like the contrast between the two worlds -- it's beautifully done.