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inktrap December 23 2012, 20:19:37 UTC
SCREAMING.
I've wanted to see this filled so, so badly. I'm utterly in love with it, the whole exchange between Brad and Schuldig was delightful. I adore Side B, but some banter between Schwarz makes it much, much better!

“So your plan is to see what someone does when the person they love almost dies? Again?” Schuldig hadn’t enjoyed it much when Brad had tried that with Nagi. And as for the attempt involving Sally and Farfarello...

Brad has the grace to look embarrassed when he replies, “But it works.”

I'm still grinning! This left me with the biggest smile in my face. Thank you so, so much. It totally made my christmas.

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red_squared December 26 2012, 22:16:31 UTC
YAY! I'm so pleased you liked this :D

Hee. That was my favourite line X) Brad does seem to rely on that tactic a lot (okay, twice in canon).

Thanks for participating! It was a wonderful prompt :Db

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summerbutterfly December 27 2012, 13:38:16 UTC
The style of this is really intriguing. I like how you used little flash-scenes to create the larger story. The dialogue is right on, too:

“Then Takatori-sama is going to be pissed when we abscond with Hidaka’s girlfriend.”

“We won’t abscond. We’ll persuade.”

“That takes longer.”

“We’ll charge more.”

XD.

As I have yet to read Side B, (don't shoot me!) I'm not familiar with Shinjou Kurumi, but I'm interested enough to go look her up...

*edited for spellfail. Sorry.*

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red_squared December 31 2012, 04:54:00 UTC
Thank you :D I use drabble snapshots when I want to tell a long story, but don't have time to write a long story -- I'm glad you think it works!

And no shooting anybody for not reading Side B -- I would not have got to it myself if two of three of inktrap's prompts had not been Side B related X)

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zeph317toho December 28 2012, 08:01:33 UTC
This was great and full of so many wonderful lines from Schuldig still being worried about his hair a year after the fire to him bargaining with his potential raise that he's suspicious of. I love how you showed Crawford and Schuldig working so perfectly together, even if Schuldig does have to get in a little poke at Nagi. And Crawford can’t seem to come up with an original plan, but at least he’s embarrassed when called on it. I just love how you show Crawford and Schuldig will always be a team. At least as long as there's free alcohol. xD

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red_squared December 30 2012, 01:27:51 UTC
Replying before LJ eats your comment again ZOMG LJ WTF?! *kicks*

Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you enjoyed this :D Schuldig will always be a teenager and has yet to realise that Nagi is starting to outgrow all of that peurile nonsense, so! That can Schu-Schu's journey of discovery X)

And Crawford can’t seem to come up with an original plan, but at least he’s embarrassed when called on it.

It happens too often in canon for it not to be deliberate :D

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lauand January 5 2013, 23:36:01 UTC
Maybe I didn't get everything because I'm not familiar with Side B, but it was a nice reading anyway, with lovely Crawford-Schuldig interaction. :)

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red_squared January 9 2013, 09:55:41 UTC
Side B is crackalicious good tiemz, but it does lack Schwarz and my favourite kitteh Yohji, so XD

Thanks for your lovely comment!

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