Poetry - "Crept in"

[weerainbow]

I was watching a movie today and suddenly felt inspired...not that this has anything to do with the movie but hey, I get inspiration at the strangest times. I ended up grabbing the nearest thing to write on which was an envelope - another one of those random, me-things I do.
I must be feeling a bit lovesick these days or something 'cause this is

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[weerainbow]

It was Once, set in Dublin about a singer-songwriter guy. The music was good, the movie was...ok

Awww thanks sweetie *feels loved* <333

Oh yeah, I've been stalking lj today...just been in the mood for it I guess, and thankfully didn't have lots to do ;o) ahh I like Saturdays like that!

[zuttonatsu]

uwaaaa~~~ you watched Once and then you got inspired?

i like the part
''the point
of no return
i'll never get it back''

there's a sweet and also bitterness in those lines.. sighed.

it's a great one, Wee!!

btw, im updating Share House in case you havent read it :)

[weerainbow]

Thanks so much for commenting on my poem!

And you noticed that bitersweet balance in it...yeah that's how it felt. And in love often that's the way, if you give your heart fully then you can't just take it back no matter how much you want to.

<333

[moonishlips]

Baaaaw. So cute! <333

I've been feeling like writing this kind of stuff lately too... Oh I hope I don't. That would just end terribly!

[weerainbow]

Thanks sweetie!! <333

Hehe, I'm tempted to say "Go on, just go for it" just to see what you mean by it ending terribly...*scampers*