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Fic: His Captain (1/7) | STXI | PG-13

Feb 11, 2011 00:02

Title: His Captain (1/7)
Author: Weebeanie
Series: (STXI)
Rating: PG-13
Length: 549 - this part
Warnings: (None)
Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine. No copyright infringement is intended. I am merely borrowing them, playing nicely and returning them in pristine condition.
Summary: Written for ksvalentine prompt - While visiting a newly ( Read more... )

ksvalentine, fandom: star trek, fic, rating: pg-13, stxi

Comments 4

just_jane_doe February 11 2011, 01:06:06 UTC

Love this from Spock's perspective. Possessive!Spock is *always* delicious - can't wait for pt 2!

weebeanie February 11 2011, 03:37:28 UTC

Thanks :)

I had it all planned out from Jim's POV then I read a comment somewhere that someone had read a lot of Kirk POV fics and longed for Spock POV. Which of course led me to change fic totally at last minute... it seemed reasonable when I was full of flu remedies.

parts 2 and 3 now up - parts 4 and 5 tomorrow
(I promise I will stop at 5!)

trista_zevkia February 11 2011, 01:25:16 UTC

I think its a nice start and I look forward to the rest. Just one question.
"Commander Spock had been forced to

The events of the previous 48 hours were a case in point."

What had C. Spock been forced to? Illness effecting your editing? I know it does to me.
Other than that, it leaves me wanting more so it's really good!

weebeanie February 11 2011, 01:39:46 UTC

Thanks so much!

Illness makes my eyeballs ache :)

Parts 2 and 3 now up - parts 4 and 5 tomorrow
(I promise to stop at 5!)