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Feb 17, 2010 16:45

Title: A Measure of Sacrifice (2/8)
Authors: butterflyweb and rawthornewrites
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: GD/Top, BaeRi
Warnings: Character death, violence
Summary: Seunghyun passes out at 8:14, Seoul time. By the time he wakes, at 10:32, the fifty-six Allied Military outposts on Earth and eleven out of fifteen satellites in space have been blown to smithereens.
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fandom: big bang, pairing: youngbae/seungri, pairing: jiyong/seunghyun, verse: a measure of ...

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gdgdbaby February 17 2010, 16:11:44 UTC
ok cl is so incredibly badass and in character :'D i love her character in this sdfgdf.

"You keep some pretty strange company, Lieutenant. Loud, too."
LOL at this and basically every other line of witty dialogue.

everything about this seems so real *__* and haha of course seungri & chaerin are at odds, even in au fic.

General Lee's patience is as short as she is.
loved this line ♥

daesung amazed me yet again in this chapter. i love how you characterize him, it's so understated yet completely him :)

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rawthornewrites February 18 2010, 08:36:04 UTC
Not to spoil the rest of the fic, but Daesung will only shine brighter in future chapters.

Thank you for your kind words. We hope you enjoy the rest of the fic!

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ayumikoshiro February 17 2010, 17:21:37 UTC
This story is so great I feel like any compliments I give it will fall short. I love the bond and understanding that they all have with one another. Poor Bae I hope he's alright. I like your CL as well.

I'm glad you continued this although my thoughts on how the first one ended were much more positive than this. More along the lines of SeungHyun gets damaged Dae succeeds and SeungHyun manages to download him into a body (Cotton Candy is the DL music) just before he passes away and Jiyong is screaming like a crazy man (and then he does the SHINee Hello Baby wake up wake up wake up) and SeungHyun does.

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rawthornewrites February 18 2010, 08:36:54 UTC
Damn. It's a shame we've written out the full sequel already or I'd pinch a few ideas. Who doesn't want to do a musical?

Thank you for reading! Next chapter should be up today.

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rawthornewrites February 18 2010, 08:37:48 UTC
At ease, soldier. ^^

Thank you so much for your kind words. The next chapter should up sometime today. We hope you enjoy it.

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rawthornewrites February 18 2010, 08:38:11 UTC
We're speedy. Thank you for reading. Next chapter should be up soon.

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lovelyable February 17 2010, 18:27:16 UTC
I knew it was CL. I love her, even if she's temporarily being a bitch since she has her reasons. And I'm still in love with Daesung and his brilliance; kind of sad at Seungri's whole situation :(; and god still so in love with Jiyong and Seunghyun and their bond. ♥

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rawthornewrites February 18 2010, 08:38:55 UTC
We needed a baddest female and we couldn't think of anyone else ^^

Thank you for your kind words. Next chapter should be up today.

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