For Starters. (Lotta Schelin / Louisa Nécib)
Title: For starters
Pairing: Lotta Schelin / Louisa Nécib
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1865
Disclaimer: Everything's entirely made up and nothing is mine.
A/N: Yes. I know. As in, I don't know either. They're just both very talented and gorgeous and ... okay, let's be honest, I don't have a justification for this. I blame cagedlight, though, inspite of her being ( Read more... )
Pairing: Lotta Schelin / Louisa Nécib
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1865
Disclaimer: Everything's entirely made up and nothing is mine.
A/N: Yes. I know. As in, I don't know either. They're just both very talented and gorgeous and ... okay, let's be honest, I don't have a justification for this. I blame cagedlight, though, inspite of her being ( Read more... )
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I love the Sunday relaxed afternoon feel of this but then you throw in Lotta's uncertainity about the relationship but it somehow doesn't kill the Sunday afternoon feeling. Idk what I'm saying but I just like the mood and feel of the story and the little details you pick up.
Two of my favourite parts for reasons I don't even know why:
Though still with her back to Louisa, Lotta's sight made her smile. Then again, that was Lotta for her. She always managed to do these things to Louisa, even if they had just lost 7-3 to the men's squad, again.
I think it's the passing mention of football but also the brief look into Louisa's competitive edge because you know losing to the men's probbaly annoyed the hell out of her.
The tiny smile appearing at the corners of Lotta’s mouth now was different from the one before; it was an almost grateful one.Again not sure why this stuck with me but I did. *shrug ( ... )
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Ah, now that you say it, I guess this Sunday afternoon feeling is what I was unconsciously aiming at. So I'm glad it came across. To be honest, I wasn't sure what to write about them, I only suddenly felt like I had to, so everything is still a little vague. But I think I'm slowly starting to get a proper grip on Louisa, at least in my head. ;D
Also, YAY, you picked up the remark about losing to the men's team. Somehow it felt like a really importante small line to me, too. I can just imagine her being like that. Probably being the one responsible for all three goals and yet being pressed because DUH, no.
I'm glad to hear so! And now I will refrain from pestering you about it and sit here in my corner, waiting very patiently for you to finish it, whenever that may be. Watch me do! :D
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