If there are no witnesses there is no crime. (4/?)

[lady_quark]

Title: If there are no witnesses, there is no crime. (4/?)
Pairing: Wayne Rooney / Cristiano Ronaldo
Rating: R (for mentions of violence)
WordCount: 2.327
Other characters appearing: Ricardo Carvalho
For karneol_vision. This has nothing to do with your (belated) birthday present but since I'm afraid finishing that one will take years, too ... I thought a new

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[karneol_vision]

O____O ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ! ! !

*unintelligible sounds*

Oh. How I hate myself. I need to be off now... I wasted my time with replying to your and some other comments and now there is no more left to comment on this?!!! D": j/k.

Seriously, I LOVE LOVE LOVE it!
And the tension!!!!! The TENSION. And then THIS now!!! What is this?! Why?! How?! D:
The sheer awesomeness of it all.... You're incredible! I can't wait to get back and read this again. If only I had a printer right here... But I'll be back, and hopefully more capable of commenting then.

Oh, and did I say how much it makes me go weak in the knees when Wayne says 'love' to Cristiano? x))) *squee*

[lady_quark]

eeeep, how I love provoking unintelligble sounds and crazy reactions. *beams*
Thanks for sharing those, honestly. :)

And maybe you should have set your priorities better, then. :P

You have now idea how it amazes me every time that you take what I've written and seriously seem to find it so entertaining. I mean, I myself find this story truly entertaining to write, but I'm always worried about the tension part, whether it'll really build up or if I'm taking things too far and they're turning hilarious. Therefore, this feedback leaves me much much more relieved. :)

Oh, and what else should Wayne call his Cris, huh? He's an Englishman, after all. ;D
Have fun re-reading at a later point!!

[karneol_vision]

I've reread that about a dozen times... and when I'm out anywhere I always think of parts, and yet everytime I want to comment something comes in between and it evades me or my mood's just so wrong for it.

Of course I am seriously invested, and find this incredibly entertainlng, lol. I hope you're aware of that where your writing is concerned you're all the way up there with the greatest authors in this fandom. This is entirely objective.
But of course it is the characters that are what make this story so extreme special for me personally. The way you get them, and the way you create and write them. They're what I want them to be, what they always were for me, and yet the're new and something else; they're so surprising and elating with all these little moments and looks and words and movements. They're so very real, and you cannot look past them or ignore them. They just grab you and get under your skin, just as the action does, the surroundings, even the light.

Heee!!! Of course #^___^#

[lady_quark]

Please, no stress with commenting, your feedback is giving me more than enough, really. Also, you have no idea how ridiculously excited you make me when you say the story 'haunts' you because I know this feeling from reading other stories myself and to know that someone feels the same way about my story is just .... wow. Thank you so much for saying that, it really makes me happy. :)

And I wouldn't quite agree with you on where I stand in this fandom, I'm doing my best to be up there in the future when I'm older, but once again ... just.
I hope you know what your words do to me, this is just ... so incredibly kind of you to say, objective or not. It's just ... guh. It means a whole lot, I wish I could express how much. &hearts

And that you like their characterization is such a relief, time and time again. Knowing that you're so invested makes me insanely and incredibly happy because really, this is all I could ask for and more.
Thanks a million for this comment, really. *hugs*

[juliealmeida]

OMG. YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! You updated!!! :D :D

That totally made my day, no... MY WEEK!

But seriously the tension? Dear sweet murphy (ignore my weird expressions...Ilove to mix them all up xD)

Cris the traitor? Could it be? :O

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I am dying right now and I seriously hope you will post before me REALLY dying of stress ! lol

Amazing job hun!♥

[lady_quark]

OH, well this comment for sure has made my week, too.
So much enthusiasm! *bounces*

ohhh, and the tension seems to work. *evil laugh*
well, whether Cris is a traitor or not and what's that all about ... who knows? ... Okay, apart from me, but... :P
But I herewith promise I'll try my best to keep you alive and not let you die because of stress. ^^

Thank you very much for this feedback, it really makes me happy! &hearts

[agnes_wonka7]

OMG!!! Can't wait to read the rest. This is so interesting!

[lady_quark]

:)))))

Glad to hear so!
I'll promise to try and update as soon as possible. :)

[_runningmascara]

love love love where this going!

the interaction between carvalho and cris is amazing because you were able to convey so many different emotions! i feel like they have some history too (much like all these characters)

and who the fuck is 'he'??? i need to know now!

[lady_quark]

oh, that's the good thing about my characters: you can always be sure that all of them got lots of backstory stuffed into hidden cupboards somewhere. ... now, the more interesting question is whether I'll be able to dust some of that stuff off and bring it to light or if it'll all just go unnoticed. duh, self.

Also, come on, you're a clever girl! Think...