Comments | weareluis: this is for keeps

kobean in weareluis

this is for keeps

Jan 12, 2008 00:59

title: this is for keeps
pairing: cristiano ronaldo & owen hargreaves
rating: pg
author's note: for england_missing. sorry took me so long, love. i hope you enjoy.

( All Cristiano wanted was to matter. To be needed and wanted. To make a difference in the world in any which way he could. But more importantly, to be significant to someone. )

cristiano ronaldo, owen hargreaves, *trishkiss_x, cris/owen

Comments 9

shandoras January 12 2008, 09:53:21 UTC

*aww-attack of huge proportions* Happy (well, in the end) Cris/Owen for once. I hate that Owen so often ends up alone in the corner or whatever.

Maybe I don’t belong anywhere, he thought. The search led him to Manchester (Cristiano).
That thought is so terrible. Thanks for mending him (them) ♥

Memming.

kobean January 13 2008, 03:00:58 UTC

oh, i am so glad to hear you enjoyed this. thank you! :)

I hate that Owen so often ends up alone in the corner or whatever.

ME TOO. he deserves to be happy.

rizzyr January 12 2008, 15:50:42 UTC

Oh.

I love love love this! The way you broke everything into little parts but tied all the conversations together.......it just worked *so* well. And Owen gets to be happy for once. Good for him!

And under the eruption of the orange and pink sky, they kissed.

That is a beautiful sentence. *swoons* Lovely.

kobean January 13 2008, 03:42:33 UTC

thank you so much! :D

bustedflush January 12 2008, 16:08:03 UTC

Trish! This is wonderful, I really like the innocence of it, and of Cris and Owen together. (And if this is the first step of you writing as many pairings and possible, I can't wait for the rest of them! &hearts)

kobean January 13 2008, 04:50:45 UTC

thank you so much! i am so glad you enjoyed it. especially since i was having a hard time finding a way to tie it all together. :) ♥

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kobean January 13 2008, 04:49:15 UTC

you have rendered me speechless.

i just - thank you, thank you. i am ecstatic that you loved it. ♥ (and you leave the best reviews. srsly.)

karneol_vision April 27 2008, 19:22:20 UTC

At the beginning I thought it was too simple due to the fact that so much was written out... but after that... it turned more philosophical, became kind of poetic, just a few words always hanging in the air... Short phrases in dialogue, just so little actually uttered and so much said. That most of the time gives me the feeling of a depressive mood.

I think I like the dynamics of Cris and Owen together. It's always sad, or rather melancholy, about reassurance and comfort, still different from most other pairings.

kobean May 14 2008, 06:02:53 UTC

(so late) but thank you. :)