fic: Love on Mars
recipient: queeniegalore
author: spirited_lizard
title: Love on Mars
pairing: Ray/Walt, Brad, Nate
rating: NC-17
word count: 1,572
summary/warnings: Ray realizes that a planetarium isn't as boring as he thought it was.
author notes: Nope, I’m not nervous at all, as I’m writing for maybe one of the best GK fan fiction writers out there..
additional note: The narration at the planetarium was shamelessly stolen from the 1.03 episode of BBC's Sherlock. Perfect that I was watching that while writing. ;)
It had been a beautiful day. With the sun high in the sky, birds chirping, it had been a great afternoon at the lake. There was never anything wrong of having a bunch of hot wet guys, Marines that is, around anyway. The ending for such a nice day almost screamed for beer on the terrasse, relaxing. Of course, Ray hadn’t calculated in Nate’s plans.
“A planetarium?” Ray asked perplex, as if he hadn’t spoken that word out loud before. He probably hadn’t.
“Yes! It’s that new one, just outside the city. And it has all those great new features and you can see the stars and even buy one! Did you know that?” Nate babbled on in full-on geek mode.
“But… A planetarium? We could also see the stars in, I don’t know, your garden, sitting on the grass and cuddling under a blanket.”
Ray winked at Walt and gave him one of those looks. Walt blushed.
Brad jumped in. “It wouldn’t be too bad for you to broaden your mind. I’m sure there’s space for something else up there,” he pointed to Ray’s head, “except sex and video games.”
All of a sudden, Walt stood up. “I’ll wait by the car.”
“What’s with him?” Brad asked when Walt had closed the door.
“Ah, he’s just a little embarrassed since you caught us on the couch last night,” Ray said with a big grin, not at all embarrassed himself.
Brad closed his eyes and pressed two fingers on the top of his nose.
“Just when I thought I had deleted that image from my brain…”
Ray sighed. “Alright, LT. You win. The planet thing it is. I’m gonna accept my fate like a man.“
~~~~~
The planetarium wasn’t very packed with people, so Ray silently thought to himself that his theory of it being a dull place was confirmed. What he liked though were that the very comfortable seats stood closely to another, so that his knee brushed against Walt’s.
He leaned back in his seat and tried to enjoy the show. When he looked up, he could see the stars, but whatever the narrator said, it didn’t make much sense to him.
“Jupiter, the fifth planet in our solar system, and the largest. Jupiter is a gas giant…”
“Just like Brad,” Ray chuckled.
“Shut up,” Brad said from his left.
“…Planet Earth would fit into it eleven times.”
“Boooring,” Ray said in a low voice.
“Sshhh…” came from around him, but especially from Walt next to him.
Ray turned toward him, his look surprised.
“You’re seriously interested in this, aren’t you?”
Walt turned to him. His eyes said everything. For a short moment, Walt turned his attention back to the stars above them, but he still felt Ray’s nagging gaze on his face.
“Come, let me show you something.”
He took Ray’s hand and led him out of the dark room. As soon as the door closed behind them and their eyes adjusted to the bright light in the hallway, Walt spoke in a normal voice.
“Yes. Yes, I’m interested in this. And do you wanna know why?”
Ray didn’t miss the serious tone in Walt’s voice.
“Sure,” he only said.
Walt took Ray’s hand again and they walked down the hall.
“When I was a little boy, nothing really interested me much. No, wait…” He laughed shortly, as if remembering something from long ago. “Everything interested me. There wasn’t one book that I could put away without finishing. But it were especially… the stars.”
Ray watched Walt intensely while he told him from his childhood memories. Walt’s face was glowing. Ray thought he liked that much.
They came to a door which Ray slowly opened and peeked inside the room.
“No aliens inside.”
The room wasn’t completely dark; the full moon lighted it enough to see bits and pieces of furniture. Ray searched the wall for a light switch and when he found one, the big room was bathed in a warm red.
Boxes stood in the corners, unopened but heavy looking, and there were pieces of carpet lying around. It was obvious that this part of the new planetarium was still a work in process.
“What is this place? Looks like a new possible cover for ‘Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus’.”
“When, please, have you read that book?”
“I read the title,” Ray answered smug.
“Well, I guess we’ll have to come back in a few weeks to find out,” Walt answered to Ray’s first question with a grin.
“Oh, you’ll have to bring on some serious reasons to make me come back here!”
Walt chuckled. “Like what?”
And then, Ray was already grabbing Walt’s face and kissing him passionately.
“Good reason,” Walt answered under his breath and Ray continued kissing him, touching and already, his hands were on Walt’s pants.
“Do you think we should…? Here, I mean?”
“Oh yeah,” Ray said. “Make me like this place.”
Still kissing, they both almost fell over a piece of rolled up carpet, but Walt got a hold of one of the boxes and then slowly, slid down to the ground with Ray.
“Here, wait,” Walt said and unrolled one of the carpets.
“That’ll leave nice marks on your knees,” Ray said. “Kinky.”
As if he wanted to prove something, Walt pushed Ray to the ground and sat on top of him, holding his arms to the ground, too.
“How about me burning your knees for a change?”
“Walter Hasser, who would’ve thought…?” Ray’s laugh was muffled by another kiss.
Walt’s hands immediately moved down to Ray’s pants and he opened the belt and buttons. No surprise, Ray was already half hard. Walt’s hand closed around Ray’s cock while he was kissing and licking Ray’s neck.
“Oh, fuck! Fuck you, Walt!” Ray breathed in excitation.
“No,” Walt said and with that, he stopped kissing Ray and carressing his cock. “Me.”
With a smile, he drew back.
“Wha… What?” Ray asked perplexed.
“I’ll stop here because I know how fast you get off on hand jobs. You will do me now.”
“Who is this and what have you done with the Walt who blushed tomato-red last night at the LT’s house?” Ray was surprised. And that was an understatement.
“Oh, fuck, Ray, just get my pants off before I change my mind! I mean, any second someone could come inside here! They’d kick us out…”
“Oh, no, we wouldn’t want that to happen.”
“I hate you.”
“You love me.”
And before Walt could say anything more, or - God forbid! - blow this whole thing off, Ray kissed him again and at once, was at Walt’s pants. They were off in an instant and even faster, he had his mouth wrapped around Walt’s cock and was sucking. He used one hand to also touch Walt’s balls, and the other moved up and under the shirt.
Low moans came from Walt and his hand gripped into Ray’s hair, held his head in place. “Mhh…,” he kept moaning, and Ray slightly felt him thrust up into his mouth. Walt was already close, so Ray stopped and moved up to Walt’s mouth again.
“Like that?” He asked as he lay on top of Walt and rubbed himself against his cock.
“Want me to show you something that you will like?” He grinned. “Turn around.”
He didn’t need to tell this Ray twice. Immediately, Ray was on his hands and knees, watching Walt as he moved around him. Ray’s cock was already out of the pants, so Walt quickly and at once shoved Ray’s pants down to his knees. That feeling turned Ray on.
Walt’s hand moved over Ray’s ass, grabbing it tight and releasing him again. Then, he licked one finger and slowly tried to enter it into Ray. His other hand was wrapped around Ray’s cock again, stroking it slowly as well.
“Fuck, yeah, Walt! Slide it in!“ Ray gasped.
“I have a better idea,” Walt said.
He let go of Ray, spit onto his fingers and made Ray really wet until he stroked his own cock once more. Slightly, he parted Ray’s ass cheeks and guided his cock forward. With the tip, he brushed against Ray, who stretched toward him. Slowly, Walt entered the tip of his cock into Ray, but then with one hard thrust, he entered him completely.
For a second, Ray’s legs turned into rubber and it didn’t help that Walt put almost all of his own weight onto his back, but he sure liked it. Walt kept thrusting in and out of Ray, making him burn up with lust. He shoved Ray’s shirt up and his hands moved up and down Ray’s back.
Then, Walt again leaned against Ray’s back, kissing him, tasting his sweat. His hand moved back to Ray’s cock and almost immediately after he had touched it, he felt warm cum flow over his hand. Ray moaned and sank onto his ellbows, breathing heavily. Behind him, Walt grabbed his ass with both hands and thrust a couple of times more into him until he came, as well. When he pulled his cock out, his cum slowly dropped out of Ray’s ass.
Walt sank onto the carpet next to Ray and took some deep breaths himself. He pulled his pants back up and then, he noticed his surroundings again.
“That was like love on Mars!” Walt breathed.
Ray smiled proudly. “Oh, I remember that show!”
author: spirited_lizard
title: Love on Mars
pairing: Ray/Walt, Brad, Nate
rating: NC-17
word count: 1,572
summary/warnings: Ray realizes that a planetarium isn't as boring as he thought it was.
author notes: Nope, I’m not nervous at all, as I’m writing for maybe one of the best GK fan fiction writers out there..
additional note: The narration at the planetarium was shamelessly stolen from the 1.03 episode of BBC's Sherlock. Perfect that I was watching that while writing. ;)
It had been a beautiful day. With the sun high in the sky, birds chirping, it had been a great afternoon at the lake. There was never anything wrong of having a bunch of hot wet guys, Marines that is, around anyway. The ending for such a nice day almost screamed for beer on the terrasse, relaxing. Of course, Ray hadn’t calculated in Nate’s plans.
“A planetarium?” Ray asked perplex, as if he hadn’t spoken that word out loud before. He probably hadn’t.
“Yes! It’s that new one, just outside the city. And it has all those great new features and you can see the stars and even buy one! Did you know that?” Nate babbled on in full-on geek mode.
“But… A planetarium? We could also see the stars in, I don’t know, your garden, sitting on the grass and cuddling under a blanket.”
Ray winked at Walt and gave him one of those looks. Walt blushed.
Brad jumped in. “It wouldn’t be too bad for you to broaden your mind. I’m sure there’s space for something else up there,” he pointed to Ray’s head, “except sex and video games.”
All of a sudden, Walt stood up. “I’ll wait by the car.”
“What’s with him?” Brad asked when Walt had closed the door.
“Ah, he’s just a little embarrassed since you caught us on the couch last night,” Ray said with a big grin, not at all embarrassed himself.
Brad closed his eyes and pressed two fingers on the top of his nose.
“Just when I thought I had deleted that image from my brain…”
Ray sighed. “Alright, LT. You win. The planet thing it is. I’m gonna accept my fate like a man.“
~~~~~
The planetarium wasn’t very packed with people, so Ray silently thought to himself that his theory of it being a dull place was confirmed. What he liked though were that the very comfortable seats stood closely to another, so that his knee brushed against Walt’s.
He leaned back in his seat and tried to enjoy the show. When he looked up, he could see the stars, but whatever the narrator said, it didn’t make much sense to him.
“Jupiter, the fifth planet in our solar system, and the largest. Jupiter is a gas giant…”
“Just like Brad,” Ray chuckled.
“Shut up,” Brad said from his left.
“…Planet Earth would fit into it eleven times.”
“Boooring,” Ray said in a low voice.
“Sshhh…” came from around him, but especially from Walt next to him.
Ray turned toward him, his look surprised.
“You’re seriously interested in this, aren’t you?”
Walt turned to him. His eyes said everything. For a short moment, Walt turned his attention back to the stars above them, but he still felt Ray’s nagging gaze on his face.
“Come, let me show you something.”
He took Ray’s hand and led him out of the dark room. As soon as the door closed behind them and their eyes adjusted to the bright light in the hallway, Walt spoke in a normal voice.
“Yes. Yes, I’m interested in this. And do you wanna know why?”
Ray didn’t miss the serious tone in Walt’s voice.
“Sure,” he only said.
Walt took Ray’s hand again and they walked down the hall.
“When I was a little boy, nothing really interested me much. No, wait…” He laughed shortly, as if remembering something from long ago. “Everything interested me. There wasn’t one book that I could put away without finishing. But it were especially… the stars.”
Ray watched Walt intensely while he told him from his childhood memories. Walt’s face was glowing. Ray thought he liked that much.
They came to a door which Ray slowly opened and peeked inside the room.
“No aliens inside.”
The room wasn’t completely dark; the full moon lighted it enough to see bits and pieces of furniture. Ray searched the wall for a light switch and when he found one, the big room was bathed in a warm red.
Boxes stood in the corners, unopened but heavy looking, and there were pieces of carpet lying around. It was obvious that this part of the new planetarium was still a work in process.
“What is this place? Looks like a new possible cover for ‘Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus’.”
“When, please, have you read that book?”
“I read the title,” Ray answered smug.
“Well, I guess we’ll have to come back in a few weeks to find out,” Walt answered to Ray’s first question with a grin.
“Oh, you’ll have to bring on some serious reasons to make me come back here!”
Walt chuckled. “Like what?”
And then, Ray was already grabbing Walt’s face and kissing him passionately.
“Good reason,” Walt answered under his breath and Ray continued kissing him, touching and already, his hands were on Walt’s pants.
“Do you think we should…? Here, I mean?”
“Oh yeah,” Ray said. “Make me like this place.”
Still kissing, they both almost fell over a piece of rolled up carpet, but Walt got a hold of one of the boxes and then slowly, slid down to the ground with Ray.
“Here, wait,” Walt said and unrolled one of the carpets.
“That’ll leave nice marks on your knees,” Ray said. “Kinky.”
As if he wanted to prove something, Walt pushed Ray to the ground and sat on top of him, holding his arms to the ground, too.
“How about me burning your knees for a change?”
“Walter Hasser, who would’ve thought…?” Ray’s laugh was muffled by another kiss.
Walt’s hands immediately moved down to Ray’s pants and he opened the belt and buttons. No surprise, Ray was already half hard. Walt’s hand closed around Ray’s cock while he was kissing and licking Ray’s neck.
“Oh, fuck! Fuck you, Walt!” Ray breathed in excitation.
“No,” Walt said and with that, he stopped kissing Ray and carressing his cock. “Me.”
With a smile, he drew back.
“Wha… What?” Ray asked perplexed.
“I’ll stop here because I know how fast you get off on hand jobs. You will do me now.”
“Who is this and what have you done with the Walt who blushed tomato-red last night at the LT’s house?” Ray was surprised. And that was an understatement.
“Oh, fuck, Ray, just get my pants off before I change my mind! I mean, any second someone could come inside here! They’d kick us out…”
“Oh, no, we wouldn’t want that to happen.”
“I hate you.”
“You love me.”
And before Walt could say anything more, or - God forbid! - blow this whole thing off, Ray kissed him again and at once, was at Walt’s pants. They were off in an instant and even faster, he had his mouth wrapped around Walt’s cock and was sucking. He used one hand to also touch Walt’s balls, and the other moved up and under the shirt.
Low moans came from Walt and his hand gripped into Ray’s hair, held his head in place. “Mhh…,” he kept moaning, and Ray slightly felt him thrust up into his mouth. Walt was already close, so Ray stopped and moved up to Walt’s mouth again.
“Like that?” He asked as he lay on top of Walt and rubbed himself against his cock.
“Want me to show you something that you will like?” He grinned. “Turn around.”
He didn’t need to tell this Ray twice. Immediately, Ray was on his hands and knees, watching Walt as he moved around him. Ray’s cock was already out of the pants, so Walt quickly and at once shoved Ray’s pants down to his knees. That feeling turned Ray on.
Walt’s hand moved over Ray’s ass, grabbing it tight and releasing him again. Then, he licked one finger and slowly tried to enter it into Ray. His other hand was wrapped around Ray’s cock again, stroking it slowly as well.
“Fuck, yeah, Walt! Slide it in!“ Ray gasped.
“I have a better idea,” Walt said.
He let go of Ray, spit onto his fingers and made Ray really wet until he stroked his own cock once more. Slightly, he parted Ray’s ass cheeks and guided his cock forward. With the tip, he brushed against Ray, who stretched toward him. Slowly, Walt entered the tip of his cock into Ray, but then with one hard thrust, he entered him completely.
For a second, Ray’s legs turned into rubber and it didn’t help that Walt put almost all of his own weight onto his back, but he sure liked it. Walt kept thrusting in and out of Ray, making him burn up with lust. He shoved Ray’s shirt up and his hands moved up and down Ray’s back.
Then, Walt again leaned against Ray’s back, kissing him, tasting his sweat. His hand moved back to Ray’s cock and almost immediately after he had touched it, he felt warm cum flow over his hand. Ray moaned and sank onto his ellbows, breathing heavily. Behind him, Walt grabbed his ass with both hands and thrust a couple of times more into him until he came, as well. When he pulled his cock out, his cum slowly dropped out of Ray’s ass.
Walt sank onto the carpet next to Ray and took some deep breaths himself. He pulled his pants back up and then, he noticed his surroundings again.
“That was like love on Mars!” Walt breathed.
Ray smiled proudly. “Oh, I remember that show!”