I love this. So cracky, but good crack, sweet crack. I'm not gonna make much sense in this comment, I think, but let me say that I really liked your Brad, I think he's wonderful. I think your characterization of Adam is very well-done. And I like your pixie Tommy. I'm very interested in his further development as a character :)
I'm so glad you liked Brad. I like him and wanted to do him justice. Characterization is important to me...so that means a lot. I'm about half way done with chapter 3. So I'll have more soon. =)
I love love love love.... ok so you get the idea right?? this is so sweet and yummy and my head is already trying to figure out how this is going to play out! Can't wait for the next bit! Hurry please :P
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ok so you get the idea right??
this is so sweet and yummy and my head is already trying to figure out how this is going to play out!
Can't wait for the next bit!
Hurry please :P
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